Utterly horrible English. Characters change gender at a whim, story doesn't flow. random emojis are used. could be a great story. does not do world building well.

there are other sites that host the original story with the author's permission. not like you, who just steal his work openly and post without prior permission.

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Great story with nice back story. Harem, not really R-18 due to lack of description. The cons are weird style of narration where the plot jumps around suddenly and of course the usual mistakes like grammer, sentence structure and wrong names.

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