Destiny_Aitsuji
Mandatory Shameless author 5-star review & announcement: Some of you may know me from the fanfictions I write and others from Ball of Nothing and some other less popular originals but here I am, attempting something that many of you know if not my game - romance. Why am I writing this? I want a contract with a certain editor I like working with so my aim is to get contracted with this so that I can get my go-to gal for issues. Also, I'm currently in a fascinating long-distance relationship and this story is a record of my personal romance and life story with twists. What is the new concept and style of this piece? I'm aiming for a third-person style similar to BON in Season 2 with a first-person inside from the journal entries. This way readers get to enjoy the gap between external reactions and internal scorn from Scarlet. How long does the series go? I'm thinking of until Scarlet comes to terms that she's fallen in love with Jester13 because that is where my understanding of romance ends at the current moment. I would continue after that based on my experience but mind you, I've only been in this relationship for about 4 months as of date of shameless review so wedding bells and all might come in late by a few years. Announcement: I am looking for proofreaders. If you love reading web novels and don't care what you read, you just love reading and hate grammar errors then please look for me on discord - Britannia#3207. I have a bunch of awesome writer friends who require English SOS. And yes, some of us are ranked. Please note that you will be tested for speed, reliability and trustworthiness as a proofreader. This is a dedicated non-paying volunteery job that requires all you love and attention to details in unpolished scripts. That's all from me, thank you for reading.
This is one of the best novels I’ve read. Yes, as a child myself, I’m probably not the best person to trust. Does that mean I won’t write this review? Obviously not, since you’re reading it. The characters are all lovable, and the interaction of the main cast seem like genuine interactions between friends. The way Scarlet observes people is fun to read, and it’s funny seeing how she spins the people around her into sea witches or scum of the earth. I also enjoy the way you make them react. Alex acted just as a ten year old should *spoiler* to having a new adopted sibling. Loving it. 10/10
I've finally caught up, and I have to say that I really enjoy this story right now. The characters are very real, human. They stress, have mental illness and none of them seem perfect, or 2-D. However, I can't really give it a perfect score because of some name errors. There are some moments when a different character's name is used instead of the one that should be used. For instance, in a later chapter, instead of saying Permanent Frost, it said Permanent Scarlet. But, that's the only con I have, which could be fixed easily... Anyway, I was slightly surprised that the story started when she was ten, as opposed to later and having flashbacks or mentions of past deeds. This way is actually quite interesting, as it's more fun to 'see' it rather than 'hear' it. So positive review from me! Please keep it up, good luck and good health!
I truly cannot say enough good things about Love Journal. I am so sad to see it end but all stories must come to an end. I am so satisfied with the conclusion. (The way you ended it leaves room for a sequel if you wanted Destiny hehe😉😊😘). Truly a great author that gets you so enthralled with the story and characters. Scarlet, Alex, and Jasper grow individually as well as together. With the help of Elfie and then him reaching out to Edward, they all quietly protect and support Scarlet as they realize the daredeviling risks she's taking for justice/peace for the Wilde family insuring the Anastasia's getting locked away for good. Truly an amazing novel💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I usually don't write reviews, but this is one of the best stories I have ever read here. The author gives the reader a unique point of view by switching between a blog post style and the actual events. I love how the events in the blog directly tie into the story. My only complaint would be: I wish there were more chapters. Thanks so much and keep it up! 😊
Truly a great story that touches on so many real life situations. I have been fervently reading it since it started. Destiny is a great writer so check out her other works too!! Scarlet has been through many hard life situations before reaching *****hood from having sh*tty parents who only see her as a tool to advance themselves to being adopted and still not feeling like she fits in to building relationships and wanting to repay kindness at the expense of putting herself in harms way to falling in love and being awkward in her relationship. Great heartfelt reading that will touch you.💗💗