lazyredragon
I could say, I really enjoyed reading the chapters!!!! It is so well written that the lines were so witty and hilarious, you'd think the author was a writer for a movie script. The only con would be the updates of the story. As I can see the last chapter was two months ago. I hope this will be updated very soon, as it is a delight while reading! πππππππ
For something with only 18 chapters this is exteremly well written im a bit jealous i have to say. I do hope the author continues this work in the future or at the very least has another on going novel with the same quality then there would be no qualms. Im not into comedy very much but this is easy going and the humor from what I read is very good lol. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
honestly, this might be the funniest stuff, at last, the pizza guy was delivered! I wanna know how he ended up in hell each character has a purpose in this story everyone from the random cashier to a freaking undead general ghost mermaid, you'll laugh in nearly all the chapters and after a long day its really just something awesome to cheer you up! Michael is my son now, i have adopted him. the characters are human and the demons aren't toned down they really are out for blood but you can let it slide because they are so cute! no one is too good or too bad they are just people only issue would be capitalization and frequency of updates please boost to three a week i know its a lot to ask but please!