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Lightning Descends by Her Will

Author: chonnie
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[ON HOLD] Before the elders, Xie Ying Yue held the testing crystal and watched it shatter in her palm. A genius, a monster, a waste. The glory of her potential vanished in the instant she tried to cultivate. Her family watched, horrified, as their precious young one bled black blood while crying out in agony. From then on, no matter what devastating pain Ying Yue endured to cultivate, one thing remained unchanged. Her power had never risen. So when faced with opportunity to defy the heavens, she takes it. °°° She narrowed her phoenix eyes at the handsome man, his peach blossoms irises twinkling in mirth. The promises that he drawled were impossible to turn down, especially when the annihilation of her family could occur at any possible time. "Such sweet words claim to move mountains and uproot kingdoms. Why offer it to me?" His lips broke out into a smirk, almost smile. "You have something that is important to me. As long as you give it, I will accompany you and be at your disposal until you can cultivate." Ying Yue frowned, "What do you want then?" The expression on his face grew even more mischievous. "A kiss." This man was insufferable and perverted, however there were things greater than herself that she needed to worry about. No matter which way she looked at it, she would be getting the better end of the bargain. Without further deliberation, her lips devoured his. ° disclaimer: all the pictures used in the making of the cover were all free for commercial use.

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This review is part of a review swap and valid till chapter five. Writing Quality: 5/5 Another rare gem on webnovel with good writing, while there's a few grammar errors. It's minor and the writing style flows well. Perhaps use grammarly and pro writing aid to help edit these mistakes. Update Stability: Only 5 chapters out, the author has other novels too so I can't judge just yet. Story Development: 4/5 - The author certainly knows where they are going with the story. There's a air of mystery around the first chapter, why did the God take away the child right as she was born? I'm hoping this is slowly fleshed out and explained during the course of the story. What happened to the Goddess? Character Design: 5/5 Only five chapters out, so this rating is subjected to change. So far only a few characters have been introduced. The author has yet to write a proper background story for them. However the female lead seems to be well thought out, judging from the chapters that's out. A girl spoilt by her adopted family and yet wanting to know, and see more of the world then she is allowed too. World: 3.8/5 - Can't say much of it, since this is just the beginning. But I can comment that the author writes the scene changes well and there's no confusion. The author does not leave room for confusion regarding setting and explains everything in detail. I hope he/she can keep this up as the story progresses. Overall: ? Not going to properly rate this yet. Five chapters is not enough to judge a story, and from what I've read so far. It has the potential to get better. The only suggestion I can really follow is what I wrote on writing quality.

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