MoonCafe
The story is great grammar is great it's a interesting read just fucking angry that the author decided that mc will be gay in chapter 29 bro what??? I've been reading this for soo long why did you not add a tag that this is BL i dont want to read no 2 guys cringey boy love like wtf at least tell us at the beginning im super disappointed that you just told us out of nowhere at the chapter 29 when i was following this story from the beginning and waiting for chapter everyday. Also you are being quite stupid you angry because people are dropping you novel when they find out that the mc is gay i dont know how you feel when you read about 2 guys kiss and do **** but i feel uncomfortable, maybe you don't soo you dont get it but its not a good feeling thats why most people don't read it.
Had a lot of fun reading it so far and I hope the author continues writing it at a fast rate. One complain I would like to make is that the title and summary of the story did not attract me at all. In fact I was about to ignore it but did a quick check of the reviews and read the review of TimeLord001 about it being about Warlord of the Magus World. I love Warlock of the Magus World and there is not enough fanfics for it. Most people give up after writing some chapters. I think the longest one was I think 60 chapters or so. My point being I would change the title and mention the fanfic is about WOTMW somewhere in the summary.