Reviews of Last Wish System

This is amazing to say the least, for world building, I'd note vote at all because there isn't just world building, there's multiverse building. For those who rated badly you wouldn't know what a masterpiece hit you in the face. I'm jealous of this writing ability, I've wanted to write a few books but I don't have the talent some people do such as you Alemillach (I hope I got that right, it's such a cool and weird name though I don't have room to judge...) all in all Yale is the best protagonist I've seen in a novel thus far keep up the good work!

The story starts off with a kid named Yale in a small clan, he "inherits" a system. The Last Wish System. His mother is dead, his father disdain's his existence, his sister is sent off to an academy. Welcome to Yale's world. As he grows and becomes a man he meets friends,family he never knew, and becomes a brother.... to a wolf. The story is told naturally through his eyes, as he adventures through his life we get to see and understand how his world, his universe, his story grows and expand. Come join in the world of Yale and his Last Wish System.

I have to give credit where credit is deserved. Well done Alemillach!! You've grinded out chapters nonstop no matter the circumstances and delivered the same great quality throughout all 500 chapters thus far. YOU'RE AWESOME!!! You deserve more credit and more readers. Honestly, I started reading LWS before it had 100 chapters and it's now one of the only 2 webnovels that I follow daily. You're amazing. You've seriously done an great job with the story and taken it in ways that I didn't see coming, yet kept it just as interesting as my first time reading. You inspire me bro, I want you to know that. If you ever want to talk to another author hit me up. I know it helps me when I'm in a writer's rut.

Just finished reading the chapters and I actually like it. I like the main character and cant wait to see his improvement, how he will become strong and slap it to his father's face hahaha. Since I'm also a gamer I like the game system added in the story feels like I'm reading a story about a character in ragna. I can't wait for the lateat update. More update please!!!!

This is one of the best I've seen so far . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ... Only reason I wrote this review is because the book was that good!!!!!

Well, I write my first review on Original Novels on this novel I Rate 5 because it truly deserve that . Honestly among all of the Original novel there is hardly anything good in them. more than 99% of them have Grammar and spelling problem in a terrible way. But this novel is truly good, not only Story is great and character design is good even spelling and grammar also nearly perfect and we can very very few mistakes in these two problem. Novel is nearly as good as translated novels. Story has great potential and if Author put time on it it'll become one of the best Novels. The Only flaw of it is the Updated Release that is slightly weak and this is the reason of low ranking of novel but inn my opinion the quality is more important that quantity. So our good fellow Brothers read this novel and vote for it maybe Author release more.

well only read 1st chapter its a novel whose mc has a system like name of novel but system is diferent from other system that i read all in all only read one chapter cant tell whats happen next but interesting start

It's good to read. Best original book I seem to have read for now, and hopefully will still continue to do so. I'd be all in it if he become very powerful(op) and versatile.

Awesome story to my liking !! Keep updating sensei !! 5 star and my daily spirit stones will be yours ...........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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We need daily updates !!! A bit filler is ok too !! .............. ................... .... .. .............,...,,........ ..........

I admire anyone who has the courage and ability to write and encourage them to continue. That said, I couldn’t continue reading this and wouldn’t recommend it to others. I hope the author will continue to write and improve or just enjoy the process. Hot he idea behind the story isn’t bad, however every other part of it seems like it was done with little effort and skill. The characters, dialogue, fight scenes, training, world building, system, etc. we’re all flimsy and have have a long way to go before this story is worth reading in my eyes. The grammar and word choice make this seem like it’s machine translated, though it’s not. I’m not a snob, and read my fair share of web novels and ln, but this isn’t even to that standard. I have no idea how this got to be in first place and I hope this isn’t the standard for original stories on here. Lord Of Hell, still of poor quality, is much better than this in my opinion. I encourage the author to keep writing though since many enjoy this story, but i would wan the potential reader not to expect much.

I tried, I really did, but my brain hurts every time I even think about this book's grammar. It's not like I am the God of grammar or anything, and I really enjoy the story. But whenever I get enthusiastic about the plot the bad writing steals that away. I do believe that the things this novel lacks is the help of a good Editor. I hope to see that one day. Till then I'll cheer from the outside. Good luck with your story and I'm glad an original work is this creative and hard working. As an avid reader I'll be checking this story from time to time in the hopes I see more quality to the grammar.

Enough with the hugging, please. Sometimes it feels like wyba turns all the characters into 10 year old girls who never saw anything cute in their lives and seeing wyba makes them want to sacrifice everything just so they can hug her. That is not how things work. Too much telling and not showing, actually 0 showing and just telling, kind of a turn off.

Great story progression so far. The MC's past life and the exact world background are shown to be mysterious. Protagonist is barely 10 years old in the beginning and his lack of knowledge for sect and the world are properly justified especially since he's believed by father. For those who love a good read this story will grow on you and leave you wanting more. The author knows proper English unlike many other original novels ( my preference as if not I'd just read machine translations). System gives quests and rewards accordingly so the OPness of the system is unknown so far. I believe if you change the cover of the novel from plain colours this will attract a lot more readers (please don't have a 10 year old on the cover though as any ***** male/female will do)

Thank you for continue writing this novel! I’m already waiting for the next chapter, keep it on! …………………………………………….................................…..

honestly just add to my library...but i will give it a five star for an original story...hardwork and perseverance...keep up the good...fighting...

I may have not read all the original novels, but still I can say this with absolute confidence that this book is the best or at least one of the best originals out there. Granted the writing isn't flawless and still rough around the edges but the story is captivating enough to make you want more. Finally an original that can stand on its own feet. Hopefully the author keeps up the good work.

Well it's got potential but the author seriously needs an editor, an then needs to rewrite all the chapters, I don't know what qidian was thinking making it a premium book, it is nowhere near the quality that one would expect from a paid story. That being said if everything aligns then it could be. Just until it does expect very poor Grammer and spelling and terrible adjectives, it reads like a very poorly translated novel, except it is not translated, it is written in English. I truly hope the author does get his act together as I would enjoy reading it when he does.