Reviews of Kingdom of Fools Online

Let's shamelessly rate our selves 5star hahahaha I mean if you can't even love and appreciate what you write then other's will also not. Writing this out of fun while trying for the first time joining a writing contest. I tried to write once and the results was i didn't manage to continue it because of to much idea inside my head. Writing this story with a goal made me realize that it is much more easy to write when their is a goal in it take for example this contest which is kingdom related stuff. I can just focus on kingdom building although I have not much experience in it but it was fun writing especially when you read a first positive comment it made me happy that someone actually enjoy reading it. I am not an author but who knows maybe I have a thing for writing. The Kingdom of Fools online is base in the limited games and novels I read and play so you might encounter familiar setting but as mich as possible I'll try my best to make it unique. The main character Saferu has a dark backgound setting as most MC does I'm a Harem Fan but I'll try mu best not to go at that direction as much as possible. After all the story is focus on kingdom building so expect more from that side. Hopefully After the contest Saferu kingdom will have its first war battle. New characters in game and in real life will be introduce later. Never realised a day well come where I shameless advertise whatI write hahaha Happy reading!!

Story pretty much 3rd rate.. Bro seems to love yaoi and yuri lol.. While its awkward to read sometimes especially when writing some ***** scene but I can see he was doing his best.. To bad not much stable update.. Still good to read if you want to pass time..

If you have time, you must read this novel. This novel start with unique mc's background that might annoy you, but it's necessary to its plot development. Man, don't let author meet me. I'll force him to release the next chapter.

Good story, has room for improvement but makes me want to keep reading. Good job and cant wait for more updates! 👍 Good job!Good job!Good job!Good job!Good job!Good job!

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