webnovel

King of games in the United States

Anime & Comics
Ongoing · 90.9K Views
  • 20 Chs
    Content
  • ratings
  • NO.200+
    SUPPORT
Synopsis

Ethan, who lives in 2023, came to the United States of the last century due to an accident. In this golden era when talents are emerging in large numbers, he decided to step in and write his own legend with his fists. :) My paypal for more chapters :) (Gabriel Aguirre gabyizumi5@gmail.com) Patreon: patreon.com/Elreycoronado18112 Coffe:https://www.buymeacoffee.com/gabyizumi5f

Tags
5 tags
You May Also Like

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews conplaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

Azrail93 · Anime & Comics
4.6
766 Chs

ratings

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background
Reviews
Liked
Newest
ElReyCoronado18112
ElReyCoronado18112AuthorElReyCoronado18112

LIKE :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Gunts92
Gunts92Lv10Gunts92

another guy who takes a mtl translates it without changing much in the weird behavior of the mc chinoix, moreover, the inconsistencies due to the Asian reference were left which makes certain scenes weird. I'm fed up, he doesn't have more than MTL on webnovel, and the worst is that the translators all ask to be paid on Patreon with low quality translation work.

BOZALTO
BOZALTOLv3BOZALTO

This novel needs more chapters to give a complet review but i still give it 5 Star. This novel needs more chapters to give a complet review but i still give it 5 Star. This novel needs more chapters to give a complet review but i still give it 5 Star.

Mario_Alonso
Mario_AlonsoLv4Mario_Alonso

It is a bit below average...WQ is somewhat choppy. The author doesnt speak English all that well and there are too many chinese expressions that ruin the flow and mood. There are even statements that contradict each other. Still, it is readable.SD is okay. Some dude is transmigrated to the year 1975. Though we are told the protagonist is someone that came to NY looking for opportunities he feels like a standard chinese story MC. Anyways, still okay.CD. Very unlikeable. As I mentioned before, MC Feels like a generic chinese protagonist. Other characters behave irrationally or outright weird several times. US. Very good. Author seems motivated and is pumping those chapters out.WB. It is okay. Author did in fact research abojt the things that he talks about but ghe way people are makes the world background feel weird, destroying the inmersion. Overall a 2,8. As an advice, I would try to avoid chinese cliches and behaviors when writing in a western setting. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] Anyways, have a nice day author.

Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14Iron_Man_3000

Just plain garbage MTL. Zero to low effort work on translation. Needs a professional editor to make it more American 🇺🇸. If the story takes place in America then it should have at least the minimum needed to make it American. STUDY AMERICAN CULTURE AND STUDY THE LAWS AND ETIQUETTE AND THEN STUDY SOME MORE

SUPPORT

More about this book

General Audiencesmature rating
Report