Reviews of Kiara Fried Phoenix: What Could Have Been

Hi! I'm the writer of the original KFP. This is a really good story and a very interesting take on what could have happened. I really like the scenarios author-sama decided to use and the way the characters interacted with each other. This is a must read if you've already read KFP. I recommend you do not read this until you finish KFP: Double Back. Thank you so much for writing this.

I'm quite surpised that you are writing a book when you have not yet fall into the rabbit hole. Hahahaha don't worry you'll get into it soon. And the story the words are good i can barely find any errors considering you say its your first time writing, i can barely tell the difference if im reading this or the original. Overall looking at the first chapter im sure it would be good. Thats all KIKKERIKIIIIIIII!!!!