Review Detail of Pain_Zuckerburg in Kiara Fried Phoenix: What Could Have Been

I'm quite surpised that you are writing a book when you have not yet fall into the rabbit hole. Hahahaha don't worry you'll get into it soon. And the story the words are good i can barely find any errors considering you say its your first time writing, i can barely tell the difference if im reading this or the original. Overall looking at the first chapter im sure it would be good. Thats all KIKKERIKIIIIIIII!!!!