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KARNA A DIFFERENT STORY

A boy from Kaliyuga reborn in parallel universe Dwaparyuga as Suryaputra'Karna'. How he manage his life? Is he following same path as history?, Or he is going to take different part in the story. How much story will change from his interventions? Will he abale to find home there? How he abale to able to archive his goals? This is a different version of Mahabharat. A 'Karna' perspective story about 'Mahabharat'. His journey, struggle, suffering, IF SOMEONE CAN FIND FAULT IN BASIC INFORMATION ABOUT MAHABHARAT THEN PLEASE COMMENT AND POINT IT OUT. (This is based on 'Mahabharat' and unsung hero 'Karna'. This story is quite different from original story, please don't get offended by this story. If someone gets offended by this story then, I am very sorry for offending you, if possible please forgive me.)

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Chapter 16. The Hunt.

     Karna' is seating under a tree near jungle. All people are preparing for the last ride for the soilders , at that time the charioteer came and asked in fearful voice, " What is your order, panipat."

  

    Karna' looked at him and asked him in husk voise ," What is your name?"

    Charioteer answered, " Ramu, Panipat "

    Karna' said," I don't see evil within you. You are a good person,I hope you will remain in this village for few days."

     Ramu asked, " Why panipat? ,"

     Karna said, " just do as I say, don't ask extra questions."

      Ramu replied," ji, panipat . I will do as you wish."

At the evening..

     After giving the last ride to the warriors.

     Karna' freshen up and lighting the campfire, for night stay near the jungle under a big tree. He taking care of 'Umbra' and sharpening the arrows which are recyclable, at that. Time the family came to him and asked, " Panipat, if possible we would like to invite you in our house for night stay. "

     Karna' looked at them and sigh, and said, " There is no need, you have a young girl in the house it will be inappropriate to stay at your house at night. Society will tarnish her reputation, and  I cannot ruin a girl's whole life for that."

      Karna' saw their hesitation, took a deep breath and asked, "What is your name? "

       Older man replied, " My name is Rajesh, and she is my wife Rakhi. And she is our daughter Kaveri."

       Karna' looked at them and said, " You all are good  people, what I am doing is very dengerous so less contact with people is much better for you. So you don't have to feel guilty not for repaying me just make some Food for me and my companion, I will be happy."

     They listen to him and understand his point, they nodded. Rajesh replied, " I will do that, Panipat. Thank you for saving our daughter from cruel fate, me God bless you in this journey."

    Kaveri bowed to him and said, " Thank you for saving me and my family, I am very greatfull for the help."

    Karna' bowed to her and said, " Devi, you don't have to bow to me, what is doing is my duty as a worrior. you don't have to feel greatfull, and God bless you for happy marriage, your lover is a good person, he stood up to someone way beyond his capabilities, I respect that."

    After dinner he was thinking in grim mood about the rumours he heard in the village , that how much the Corrupt King Sunil has became, he exploiting in his region in the name of making  temple and Palace, he is kidnapping beautiful girls and women to make them his mistress, he has destroyed many families.

  

     After listening Karna' has made up his mind to put him down for good.

Next day..

      Karna' is Praying to 'Suryadev' and 'Mahadev' for his upcoming journey and struggle.

      After packing up he continues to his journey towards the capital. He has made up his mind he going to put down the corruption in this region, King Sunil' and his Royal subjects have become greedy and 'Adhrmi', they have to be put down or people will not survive in this area.

After 2 days....

    Karna' is outside the Capital, he is in small forest nearby capital, he has to go sneaky and complete his job. No one should know about this.

    He feed his horse and feed himself, and rest for the evening, because he has to do lot of work tonight.

     At night a black shadow is moving silently inside the capital and petroling the capital, he is finding the royals who are beyond resumption.

    He saw all the evil deeds they are doing, he prayed to 'Mahadev' and with the firm look in his eyes set of in his hunting.

    

     He set on his own the first terget, he is a middle age fat man, he is raping his unconscious Maid, he has many cases like this but all the time he got away because he is a member of Royal court . Karna' disgusted by the site he control his anger and disgust then he took out his Bow, he closed his eyes took deep breath and calm himself down and he opens his eyes, he took out his arrow hith a pointy metal covering top of the arrow. Karna' pulls his bowstring full and and release the arrow, that arrow zoomed at terget in lightning speed and shot center of his eyebrows. With the sherr force of the arrow he shot backwards and landed in a thud.

    

    Karna' folded his hand and prayed for the deceased. He the got up and moved towards his second terget.

     Karna' goes to some more Royal subject's house and who are beyond resumption he has to dispose them.

    Royal Mantri Akshay is in his bedroom enjoying company of his wives, he has fair complexion and likeable face but has hidden evil beneath his mask, some of his wives have sadness hidden hidden beneath their eyes. Some of them are loving corpse. Some are kidnapped daughter of someone of someone is lover of someone.

     Karna' watching this in pearcing gaze from a tall tree outside of the palace, he observing each and every moment of the corrpted Mantri Akshay the last terget before King Sunil, Akshay has done various crime such as money exploiting, account displacement, kidnapping, physical assault, sexual assault, Kidnapping, he has every crime to die many time over.

     Karna' took a deep breath and took out the Bow and a solid arrow for 'power shot' he closed his eyes and feel the wind movement, he prayed to 'Mahadev' for power and courage, and open his eyes pulled the bowstring fullest and aim at the Akshay who is enjoying his intimacy with his wives, He release the arrow that shot at a lightning speed , it Pearce at the eyebrows of the Beast in human skin, with the thud he fell backwards.

     Karna' took deep breath and put down his Bow and Arrow, he prayed to the lord for the soal, and moved towards Raj Mahal(palace).

Outside of the Royal palace...

    He looked at the palace he observe the security of the palace he knows that he has to infiltrate the palace he climbed up  a tree and hide his Bow arrow and his dress, and weating for a corrupt servant, he saw one, he is the head of the royal servants, he looked cunning and has a evil smile on his lips, he is coming out of the palace.

    Karna' weating for an opportunity, and he got one, he gripped the Royal Servant, and dragged nearby small bush. He is struggling to broke free but Karna' is  gripping him. He went limp and unconscious Karna' checked him and make him fully unconscious, stripped him and got into his clothes, disguising himself as the servant, and checked himself his dagger, narrow wooden pipe and poisonous spicks.

    Karna' then climb on the trees he hidden equipment, he analyse the situation and guards, he got down and goes towards the Royal palace, his heart is pounding in nervousness, he calm himself down, and greeted the soldiers, and went inside, after blend in the plane site among the servants.

     He looked all the rooms and stealthy approach the royal chember, he took out his hollow bamboo pipe and wooden spikes smeared with poison which make them sleep, he glanced at the guards and aim at them took deep breath and shot the spike with hollow bamboo pipe, he shot first two guard with succession in first corridor and they feel some sting but brush them by scratching it, poison took the effect they feel uncontrollable sleepy they sit on the corridor and sleep. With the success Karna' goes to second corridor does the same, he reached the King's Chember. He looked two no gurd place he heard muffed sound and moaning, he immediately understand why is guards not placed outside.

     He slowly opened the door without making sound and checked the situation he saw King Sunil is engaged in sexual infraction with his wives, he saw 4 women laying on the bed and one is under him. He aimed at them and shot the poisonous spicks and make all 5 of  them sleep he also shot king Sunil a heavy dose spike then sneek inside. King is middle of the pleasure he doesn't notice that all women are asleep he also felt sting but with the sexual pleasure he doesn't notice the grim situation.

     Karna' took out his dagger stealthy approach the king and covered his mouth with his left hand and dragged him out of the bed. King Sunil's eyes widened in surprise, he struggled but no avail he felt weakness.

    Karna' took out his Dagger and slit the throat of the King Sunil. He put down him and looked struggling king with cold eyes.