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KARNA A DIFFERENT STORY

A boy from Kaliyuga reborn in parallel universe Dwaparyuga as Suryaputra'Karna'. How he manage his life? Is he following same path as history?, Or he is going to take different part in the story. How much story will change from his interventions? Will he abale to find home there? How he abale to able to archive his goals? This is a different version of Mahabharat. A 'Karna' perspective story about 'Mahabharat'. His journey, struggle, suffering, IF SOMEONE CAN FIND FAULT IN BASIC INFORMATION ABOUT MAHABHARAT THEN PLEASE COMMENT AND POINT IT OUT. (This is based on 'Mahabharat' and unsung hero 'Karna'. This story is quite different from original story, please don't get offended by this story. If someone gets offended by this story then, I am very sorry for offending you, if possible please forgive me.)

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Chapter 11. Beginning of Conspiracy.

Few days later..

     While helping Neighbourhood Karna' heard rumours that Pandavs' are getting all the love attention and Pandu' putra Yudhisthir' is going to be crown prince.

      He knows that someone is fanning the flames and this flames will burn whole Kurubanhsi to the ground.

     After evening Puja while he is sitting on the rock at the bank of Ganga river. Karna opens his Data panal.

'Radhey' 'Karna'./ 'Vasusena'./'Karna' (suryaputra).

Race: Human(with divinity).

Rank: .Ardh Rathi.

Level. 03/30.

Skills:

      Photographic memory. L 10/20.

      Minor healing factor. L 19/20.(U)

      Pseudo photosynthesis. L 8/20.

      Hawk eye. L 15/20.

      Superhuman reflexes. L 10/20.

      Superhuman stamina. L 12/20.

      Superhuman speed. L 10/20.

      Superhuman strength. L 8/20.

      Heightened senses. L 10/20.

      Language efficiency. L 8/20.

      Emotional control. L 10/20.

      Pain resistance. L 10/20.

      Heat resistant. L 15/20.

      Fire resistant. L 12/20.

      Indomitable will. L 12/20.

      Sewing. L 15/20.

      Cooking. L 16/20.

      Housework. Max.

      Swimming. Max.

      Master archery. L 5/50.(U).

      High swordsmanship. L 35/40.(U)

      High unarmed combat. L 20/40.(U)

      High axe fighting. L 25/40.(U)

      Silent step. L 15/20.

      Aura councelling. L 10/20.

      High Meditation. L 20/40.(U)

    

      High weaponsmith. L 39/40.(U)

( basic L 1-20, high L 1-40, master L 1-50,

Grand master L 1-75, perfect L 1- ???.)

Talents:

      Supirior archery talent.

      Supirior swordsmanship talent.

      Top weaponry talent.

      Top unarmed combat talent.

      Top Aura talent.

      Top chakra talent.

      Top stealth talent.

      Top weaponsmith talent.

      High disguise talent.

Boons:

Curses:

Astras:

Sastras:

Weapons:

       Surya kabaj(Armour) G devine.

       Surya kundal.(earrings) G devine.

    He closed his data panal and goes to the home, he sees his father is little bit tense.

 

    After coming home he took blessing of his father and mother. He touched their feet and said " pranam mother , pranam father. "

     They also blessed him. " Sada sukhi raho putra. "( Be happy forever son ).

     They he sat near their feet and asked,

   " what happened father? You look a little bit tense. "

     His father said with a sigh, " All the Princes are grown up, it's their playing age, and their is power struggle happening in the Palace. "

    He also Shake his head and said," life is never easy, father. We just have to go with the flow. "

    His father look at him sighed and said in sad tone ," yes,"

    His father also said, " I know you want to be warrior. But Beta in our caste we have no right to weld weapon. I and your mother also knows that you will weld weapon anyway, so from whom you are going to learn? Is their any teacher who doesn't discriminate against caste? "

      Karna' smiled wryly and look at his father and mother. And Said, " I thought I was hiding quite well. "

     Radha' maa hold his face and pet his head and said, " you can never hide something from us beta. "

     Adhirath' baba said, " have you thought about this problem, from whom you are going to learn? "

     Karna' said with a sigh, " nobody is going to teach me because of caste. Their is only one person who can teach me is Bhagwan 'Parshuram'. "

    His father said, " are you sure? I only heard he only teach 'Brahmins'. "

    His mother said worried voice, " are you going lie beta, I never thought you to tell lie, and don't learn anything with deception or it will become poison. "

    He assured his mother, " No mother I will be doing that. That is 'Adhram'. I heard Bhagwan'Parshuram' is Lord 'Vishnu's sixth Avatar, and God doesn't discriminate against people. "

Few months later...

   Pandavs and Kauravs are playing tag at the bank of Ganga river near the forest,

    While paying some misunderstanding occurred between them, Bheem' get physical with some of Kauravs , So a Duty of a big bother 'Suryodhon' has to stepped in to separate two parties, while separating Bheem' also got physical with 'Suryodhon' which triggered fighting between them, guards goes to inform someone, Mahamatim 'Bhishma' and Mahamantri 'Vidur' came to rescue and scold 'Suryodhon' for fighting while playing, 'Suryodhon' tried to explain to them but they didn't listen to him.

      

       While this incident happening Gandhar Raj 'Sukuni' is watching with crooked smile as watching a play and he is the director.

      While this incident happening from the top of a huge tree inside its dense leaves a pair of Hawk-eye watching. And analysis this incident. He thought that Elders are baised towards Pandavs' or Bheem at the fault. He shaks his head and muttered, " spoiled brats. "

      At the time he was doing evening Puja he meet a person also seating at the bank of the river, he was sad, and looking depressed, and as if asking for comfort from maa Ganga'. He looked at him carefully, he was Mahamatim 'Bhishma'. 'Bhishma' aslo looked at him, Karna' just bowed and left without saying anything.

     At the time of sleeping he analysing all the information he got that, 'Suryodhon' has no elders who loved him or gave him any  recognition. Which is very troublesome thing. Now he is kid, he is an open paper. Easy to manipulate .

     He also thought Pandavs' are not much better they have false pride, they all have ego. Ego that their brother is eldest of all of princes so he has right to the throne. They are granted that Yudhisthir' is going to be future King. And ego and pride themselves for Debputra what are they doing is right.

   

     He also today's incident something is off , but what is off he doesn't know.

From then on little, Little fight happened between Pandavs' and Kauravs'.

One year. Later...

       Karna' is now 16 ,after practice he is watching secretly at  Pandavs' and Kauravs,  he watched they are playing and after playing they goes to a little nap.

      Few days ago he got the news that Bheem' again got physical with some Kauravs' thus lead them to injury. But Palace elders just pointing out the mistakes of Bheem' and let him go, without any punishment.

    Thus 'Suryodhon' became dissatisfied with the elders and goes to Mama 'Sukuni' for solution, and revenge.

    At that time Mama 'Sukuni' promised to help him in his revenge.

     Today Mama 'Sukuni' called 'Suryodhon' gave a bowl of kheer to 'Suryodhon' and said, " Beta 'Suryodhon' this is special kheer prepared for Bheem' after eating he will become weak then you can win in a fight with him and get your revenge. "

     'Suryodhon' felt something bad about to happen , he is hesitating, but he shakes his uneasy thought and asked," But Mamaasri, this is  deception, is it not 'Adhram'? "

     'Sukuni' said with smile, " Beta you are now kid, I promised you that I will help you to become king, and everything is fair in love and war. "

      'Suryodhon's eyes dimmed he knows that he is not going to gain love and recognition from elders, so he only has is subjects as king where he can get his love and recognition from everyone in Hastinapur kingdom, if he is a good ruler. He stop his hesitation and took the Kheer and goes towards the Bheem'.