Reviews of Kalon

Holy crap this was suggested to me and personally i love it you should definitely continue to write this story. I like this character already. Is this going to be a completed book?

Amazing! Very detailed and desriptive this book is highly recommend. Love it so far and want to read more. This is a good way to start off your carrer and you are really good at it, Keep up the good work!!

Bro i freaking love this chapter Flaneur. This is super detailed and personally i would read this over and over again amazing job. I was wondering when you are going to come out with the second chapter i can't wait!! Keep up the good work

There is an enticingly descriptive and lyrical nature to the story which insists I return for the next chapter! Looking forward to reading more

Love this so what novel. Keep up the good work Flaneur! it is a good way to start off and all the details really make it 10 times better. Can't wait for chapter two!

Great beginnings- can’t wait to read more. Your talent and creativity are clearly on display here. Keep writing because the world is waiting

I loveeeee the second chapter and i agree it is better than the first but overall amazing job and keep em coming can't wait for the next one!!

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I-I can't explain how good this peace of art is. This is very discriptivie and unique and i would loveeeee to read more soon. I will be up to date on your storys.

I find female protagonist stories to either be horrible or top notch, and we got a winner here. I highly recommend this book. A little slow on updates but if that bothers you you should definitely put it in your library to read at a later date

The rest of these chapters are crazy good and I like where this story is going. Its a very unique story and can't wait to read more.-------------

(Don't take my rating above into account) I'm announcing my move to another website for online writing and reading. If anyone is interested in continuing to read my story. Please read it there. The website is called (royalroad.com) The book name has not changed.