Ara_Kneinth
The first chapter was very emotional, and the mc's will to live right when it was too late for her was heartbreaking. I will say though, your paragraphs are very long and dividing them out into smaller parts would be more pleasing to the eyes for all your readers. Other than that, this book seems very promising.
Well, expecting social responsibility on web novel is as bad an idea as trying to find gold on road, yet... I stupidly try it some times. No matter how well formed scenario, I don't like suicide. I don't like smoking.. I don't like that in premise at all.. My needless prudish behavior aside.. The novel is well written. I am looking forward to reading it. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.