Tiger_Eyes
This is a surprisingly good book. The writing is top tier and it skirts the fine line between funny and serious. It's got jokes but it doesn't lose itself in trying to be funny and I respect that. There are explanations for the things that happen but it doesn't make it seem simple with stupid lines or too complicated by explaining every little detail. The author has a really good take on what Shukaku did to Garra's psyche as well. It's usually overlooked in most fanfics I read, but having a gaint murder monster inside you for years isn't exactly something that you walk off. All in all it's really good.
I'd put a 6 if I could. This book is so well written, with poetry in words and images, that you feel like drowning in it. The character development is without a fault, all in nuances, greys rather than black and white. Human beings with faults, emotions and great qualities. Honesty, It was a great read ! Go for it, don't hesitate.
Really liking it actually. More people should read this! (Ugh, 140 characters O.o πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ)
Wow. This story is breathtaking! Gaaraβs intricate psyche is beautifully and heartbreakingly portrayed, and FL Rin is the complex, understanding, giving friend and partner and love Gaara always needed AND DESERVED. The writing is also top-notch. I am completely transported to this world and feel connected to the characters. Also, it deals with sadness and humor with an equally light touch, so youβll be constantly entertained and delighted! Any fan or Naruto will LOVE this book!
An emotional rollercoaster from sadness to loud laughter and horror to that soft fuzzy feeling in ones chest. The writing quality i would consider "top-notch" (professional level). The characters and world really adds onto the "canon" without feeling out of place, we even see very believable parts of the "vulnerable sides" of the caracters we love or "love to hate". I feel this story really "adds" to the "Narutoverse" in a very immersive way.
Hi! I kinda forgot to review this masterpiece and now I'm here to fix this oversight of mine.π The story, characters and plot are just the best! The text is very clean, meaning I didn't see annoying errors all the time (which I try hard to get rid off in my works but still fail) and got enjoy a wide vocabulary description of things and sceneries. Your writing style is superb in my opinion and the book is one of the best in terms of both, the story and the grammar! Keep it up! Love the fanfic!