Artchie245
This is the first IS fanfic I have read, and so far it has been great. Other than a few grammatical errors and misspellings, the writing quality is great, great character development, and no unnecessary filler chapters. This has become one of my favorite fanfics. Keep up the good work author. ππ
First, thing I should mention this is the first IS fanfic I read here and that's a BIG PLUS as I cant any here, or much in other sites as they seem to be a rarity. I have find some IS fanfic in other places but they didn't have much of a story where this one is more focused which is a good thing. Second, there are a few grammatical errors but it doesnt matter much so it's fine. Third, I hope that the author doesnt drop this and completes this fanfic as I have seen a lot of fanfic that I enjoyed and had plenty of potential dropped for various reasons so. Though i wonder does he make this from referring to the anime or Light Novel as I've seen several works that had some differences between the two. Finally, I should mention that the quality of this fanfic is much higher than other IS fanfics that ive read in other sites. This one writing is much more clear and easy to understand that even with the few grammatical errors it's still understandable.
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