Reviews of In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System
In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System
SupremeCookie
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This was interesting, to say the least. Enjoyable to pass the time. Can't really say anything about it that I really hate, or dislike, it was meant to be a fun perverted naruto fan-fiction, and it delivered, can't complain.
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In fact, the writing of this book is kind of silly, maybe pre-teen people like it, but the way the author writes his dialogues is very silly, it doesn't have that reality, some certain touches of emotion, malice etc.... There's the issue of the main character actually being the most envious in history, he didn't reincarnate as naruto, but for some reason he wants everything that would be his, he could follow another path. Of course, let's not forget the difficulty in using address pronouns, it's too much noun repetition when one pronoun would suffice.
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MC is on his way to be completely OP. That's just the way the story intended to be and imo it is good. It is a comedy with a balanced amount of lemon situations. Actually what i like the most in this fan-fic is a pace of the story. Good amount of time skips , but they are justified and explained accordingly. This story isn't really serious , comedy is the main part of the whole plot here. And it's good comedy , at least better than most )
