Review Detail of Everton_Mason in In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

In fact, the writing of this book is kind of silly, maybe pre-teen people like it, but the way the author writes his dialogues is very silly, it doesn't have that reality, some certain touches of emotion, malice etc.... There's the issue of the main character actually being the most envious in history, he didn't reincarnate as naruto, but for some reason he wants everything that would be his, he could follow another path. Of course, let's not forget the difficulty in using address pronouns, it's too much noun repetition when one pronoun would suffice.