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In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

THIS IS MADE AFTER WATTPAD TRAUMATIZED ME. So to save and protect other people eyes. i took it in my hands to make a lookism fanfic. Without Any Lg Sh*T. The fanfic is pretty simple. A guy die. Guy meet Rob. Guy spin wheel. Guy gets To be A system. And gets the Perfect body Of Daniel park. Guy happy. Now the guy makes changes in the plot. He will show why Charles took interest in the second body. He will show what is the ture power of it. Wannna know what happens when you send a guy with as a system and gave him hack's. Read to find out. Welcome to my fanfic. Hope you will stick with me to the end of it.

HAMMAD · Anime & Comics
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Chapter 18 : school new transfer student and Charles attention

Story starts here.

while both little daniel and System are going through their hurdles. little daniel begin trained by james lee for a month. And system using big body making a Legend in the detention center. 

We see in school. zack who always sat beside daniel sees that the seat is empty. He feels a little sad but then seeing everyone else also feeling sad. He says "I talked with daniel before he was taken if he found out we are acting like this. He will be angry. And its not like he is gone their for a long time. He will be out in a month". As then hearing zack speaking their moods improve.

As then jay who was thinking of asking his father to help daniel is pushed out of his thinking. As then homeroom teacher enters and says "I have 2 announcement to make. As most of you all know about daniel. As how he was sent to detention center for almost killing zues. We cannot all feel sad for this matter i talked with principal. He said daniel will be out soon in a month or faster. so don't worry about him. As then we also have a new transfer student in the class. come in".

As then students starts murmuring among them . Thinking how a hot beauty will come in the class. As girls expecting another boy. 

Then the doors open. As then they all see a little fat girl come in the class. As their instinctive reaction to the girl is to show disgust. As they are about to bad mouth her. But everyone stops and starts looking at zack who was giving them the deathglare.

As they understood who ever said anything about the girl will have to talk with zack after the homeroom teacher will leave. So they all shuteed their mouths for their own good.

As then the girl goes to introduce her self. "Hello my name is crystal choi. And i transferred here to experience the school life as most of the time i was homeschooled". After hearing her intro teacher tells her to go and sit to an empty seat.

She looks around but sees daniel park is not in the class. As she thinks he might have not come. And then goes to a sit to a seat in front of mira. 

As it was empty. After a while the lunch bell rings. As then crystal is surprised to see how all girls are treating her mira, zoe, yui are treating her with kindness. As then she thinks they must have some other motives.

As then yui noticing it. says to crystal "Don't worry no one will treat you bad in the fashion department. even if someone does just tell us and we will have zack take care of it". As they crystal is surprised and skeptical with why are they willing to help her as then she asks "why are you trying to help me". 

As then zoe hearing this says "we also have a little friend like you. he is similar to you. But he is always helped by daniel. As like you asking me i asked daniel the same question?. but his reply shocked me" . System using big body "why do i help little daniel cause i can. if i don't help him. how will i face my to the family on the other side. I have it all and i can help him so i help". 

As then crystal hearing this asks like she does not know who daniel is "who is daniel park did he not come to school today?". As then zoe mira yui hearing this all look down.

As then zoe explains everything of the autumn camp. crystal after hearing it is enraged she says "How could they take daniel to detention for saving mira". As then zoe explains more what happened to zeus.

After hearing zeus condition crystal says "well it could have been worse or better depending on the situation". As she sweats drops. then zack comes towards the girls. As then seeing crystal he introduces himself. As they all reach cafeteria while talking. Zack sees vin who was picking on the duke. As then vasco also arrived their. 

vinjin who was known as the best singer of the vocal department. was both shocked and angry at the time reasons were. He heard form eli how easily he was taken down without any chance to fight back.

Then to make the day worse he heard how duke was slowly getting popular. While he was eating lunch in the cafeteria. He keeps hearing how the whole school is talking about how daniel was unjustly put to detention center. As then he hears another talk which pisses him more. "Hey did you heard duke's new song. It's pretty fire dude". 

After hearing this vinjin who angry is pissed. As he goes for a sip of water to clam him self down. Finding the glass empty. He then sees duke enter the cafeteria. He throws his glass toward duke and says "Get me a glass of water you fat f**k. look at you look pathetic". 

As then duke who was about to pick up the glass. He suddenly feels a hand on his shoulder. As then he looks over seeing zack and vasco standing behind him. As then zack who had his hand on duke shoulder stops duke form picking up the cup.

As then zack says "Big daniel only went for a day and look at you back to bullying weak huh. vin your truly a low life. why did you not do this when daniel was here". 

vinjin who was already pissed is now angry when he heard zack mention daniel. As then duke who was sitting now stands up fastly. As then he kicks the chair back and goes near zack. As then he stands near zack. with them both in each other range.

As then vin who was on the verge of fighting says "why don't you repeat what you just said. punk looking at you makes me angry and you running that shithole of a mouth makes me more angry". 

As then in the cafeteria eli jay and more people enter. As then eli asks a passerby asking what happened. passerby was jinhoo he explains what happened after hearing it all eli tries to go in the front to stop a fight form happening.

zack seeing vin was in his arms range says "did not hear me the first time. let me guess all that trash sound singing made you deaf. sadly only if someone told you how you sound. it might have saved your ears". This was the last straw that broke camel's back. As then goes to grab zack collar to throw him on the ground.

Zack already guessed that vin will get physical. As then he steps back and going to side. As then vin sees his grab failed. goes to grab zack arm to get him into a submission. But underestimate zacks punching speed. he is punched in the gut and receives a sharp right hook on his jaw knocking him on the ground.

vin laying on the ground feels less pain. But he feels his pride was punched. As he remembers how daniel easily knocked him twice. but he dismissed it due to having his guard down. But now losing to zack he feels that he has grown weak.

As then zack seeing vin not getting up. He leaves to go to the mira side. As then mary kim come in the cafeteria and sees vin on the ground she goes near him and asks "what happened here?. I leave for 2 minute and look at you already finding a new spot to rest".

vin hearing mary voice comes back to reality. As then he gets up like and acts like nothing happened and says "What can you say they clean these floors too good. look you can see your ugly face in it". 

mary hearing this form vin's mouth she throws him back on the ground using a judo shoulder throw. and leaves in an annoyed mood. As then everyone seem to forget that a scuffle happened between zack and vin.

crystal was sitting with mira and rest of the girls says "what did zack say about vin. when daniel was here was he scared of daniel". As then yui hearing crystal answers explains how daniel used to help duke and other bullied students. now crystal is curious about daniel. 

we see system using As then he sneezes as then he says "huh. who is thinking about me". As then the guards open the door of the cell. As then he is surprised seeing the clean cell and such order. As then he says "get up go out of the cells". As then they are escorted towards the detention center grounds. As then getting their system sees how many have formed groups and are looking at him. 

Then we see 8 people surround him. As then daniel sees that his cell mate who was beaten was also in the group. As then after surrounding him he gives daniel a look of hate and says "you should have known what was coming after what you did in the cell". As then daniel cuts his talk off by saying "If you are gonna bore me with talk so get out of my way. I have somethings to do", 

As then people who had surrounded daniel are angry with daniel way of speaking. As then one of them says "look at him acting tuff. look around you. we have surrounded you. you have only one way to leave say sorry with you sitting on your knees other wise we make you". After hearing what the random dude say. system using big body starts laughing and says "no i am not surrounded. But you all are surrounded by me alone".

As then after hearing this rush toward daniel. But are easily taken down by him. As then system goes away sayin " Just you 8 surrounding me what do you think of your self's. even if the whole detention center surrounded me i can easily beat them. wasting my damn time weak worms". As then after a while of walking system sees a corner with walls which had a red spots on it. system seeing this directly knows how this was painted.

As then he goes in the corner. As sees it more clearly but slowly behind him many people are slowly surrounding him. reason they don't like what daniel said. As then looking behind him. system using daniel big body whistles and says. 

"what do we have here?. is it a welcome party for me. if yes then I thank you all". As then the people surrounding his one of them says "Yes this is a welcome party for you. But not in the way you think". As then system hears another one say and he remembers that voice "How about you all let me have some fun before you beat his face to a mess". As then darus hong comes forward. 

Hearing that sentence. system using second body says " Good you send your self here. saves me trouble of finding you". As then system rolls up his cuffs and goes to darushong. seeing this darus also says "oo you wanted to find me. good if you cooperate with me easily i will save you form them all. it might hurt at first but you will get used to".

As then hearing this system locks his eyes with darus as then he tries to touch big daniel face. He then suddenly feels that daniel is turning upside down. He then quickly realizes that its not daniel who is turning but him. As then system raises his leg above his head and brings it down with enough force smashing darushong face with his heel. and pushing him into the ground. As other people seeing what happned to darus are shocked.

As then daniel slowly turns to face them and says with a kind smile which if any girl saw will faint. but for them thats a devil in human skin smiling "Hope your all ready. cause i just started". system using perfect body is surrounded by 350 imates. But feeling no fear. As then 5 mins later darushong also wakes up. As he slowly gets ups adjusting to a sitting position. 

He remembers what happened to him as then he gets angry with veins on his fore head showing. As then he says loudly "Dam you pretty boy. if you had cooperated with me i would have saved you and might have gone easy on but now don't blame me for what is about to happen. yourself made this coming to you".

As then darus turns around seeing the bodies stacked on top of each other. As then he feels his legs shaking. as then he says "What the hell happened where are the guards who did this". As then he looks around seeing 350 people who were with him all on the ground waling in pain. As then he looks someone sitting on the piles of bodies.

As then he hears a voice he will never forget in his life "lookie what we have here, weren't you gonna save me form them. and what were you saying before can you repeat". Darus can feel his legs slowly giving up. he wants to run but he cannot move. 

After all this darus now feels what's it is like to be terrorized to the point of your legs not responding. As then he sees daniel getting up form the stacked bodies as he makes his way down. with out caring where he stepped on.

Darus is scared like never before. As then system using big body of daniel comes closer to darus. And says "You passed out to quick. Before i could get some good hits but now your awake. Why don't you be good boy and run. I will give you 3 secs lead run call the center guards or run back to your cell for 3 secs i will not move". 

As then darus who was about to say something. sees daniel counting 1. darus starts running but he trips over an inmates body and falls face first on the ground without thinking much he starts screaming for the someone to come help him. 2 now he is shouting on top of his lungs. 3 he gets on his knees asking "Let me go. i swear i will never do anything wrong again. I swear". 

As then darus sees daniel moving toward him. As then he hears daniel words which makes his whole body cold "what about them did they not ask you to let them go. Did they not ask for a second chance. Did they not beg. Did they not tried escaping. But what happened in the end did you let them go. did you gave them a second chance. tell me darus how you feel now. is not even compared to them. Your despair is not even a fraction of them. Now we already wasted too much time someone must have heard your pig assed voice. Allow me to enact revenge on the victims behalf's". 

As darus who's head was on the ground sees their is no way to talk out of his situation. He sees daniel standing close to him. The last ditch effort he goes to grab daniel leg but fails. As system who already knew he raises the foot which darus was trying to grab and stomps on darus wrist area. As then a crunch sound is heard. Darus screams in pain. As then he feels how his victims must have felt. he wants to apologize but no voice is coming out of throat. only pain full grunt's and tears on his face. then he hears a voice which makes him shiver. "Try to not pass out you still have many more places that are to be broken".

darus "please let me go ple"

daniel "shhhh you must have seen what happened now. after the guards discover this am pretty sure am gonna spend a long time in solitary confinement. Before i go their let me do the world a favor by putting you out of commissions for a while". with use of intimidation giving darus hong ptsd and mental trauma with last saying these last words "What's a thousand minus 1?".

As then in the whole detention center heard a voice which will make them lose their sleep for many nights.

After daniel who was done with darus sees guards coming towards him. As then guard screams "STOP WHAT ARE YOU DOO". guard seeing the bodies surrounding daniel. He is shocked and is terrified of what happened here. As then guard who was about to ask what happened here.

Sees one of the beaten people wake up. As then seeing guard and daniel. He crawls toward the guard saying "Help me. he is a monster. he beated us all. He is not human he is a devil in the form of human help. help us all". The guard hearing and seeing the prisoner in his feet. He is zoned out thinking of all the possibilities on how and what weapon did daniel used to do what he saw. 

As then he sees daniel standing and darus in his feet. He can see darus arms and legs bent into the places where it should not bend. As then he gets out his batton and says in a fearful voice "stop don't move other wise i will use it". System after hearing and sees guards legs shacking does not move. As then guard calls for more people to come and help him detain daniel park and get other in the infirmary.

After a while of waiting many guards and some medical staff members of the prison. after seeing a what felt like a crime scene of a genocide. with all the walls covered in blood of the fallen and painful groans of the fallen people . All look over seeing a teenager with an innocent face. doing what he could do. 

As then the old warden arrives in the area. After seeing this he felt he has returned 5 years back. He remembers the same scene but when he looks over he sees gun shadow on daniel park. As he can see gun giving his deranged smile behind daniel. As then he sees the walls. He can see the blood stains going over the wall. He is sure if he could see the top of the wall. It will be also covered in blood satins. The kid who he thought was surrounded in gun's shadow. Now he can see the true look. That their was not gunpark in front of him. But someone who was beyond gunpark. 

The old warden can swear he can hear guns laughter. As then he remembered. What gun once said during the same fight "Who can kill me is it you or any one here. Will one of you be known as gunpark killer's". The warden can see it a battle between 2 monsters. He can imagine the scene as how only one will walk away.

As then he is pulled out of his fantasy by a guard asking "what should we do now. should we send him to solitary confident for a month. But he is only here for a month. He has already passed his first week. What should we do now". As then after hearing this warden replies "put him in the confinement cell. We will see what to do in a while". 

guard hearing this does as he was told. As then system using big body is taken away to the confinement. warden stays their staring at the stained wall for an unknown amount of time. As then system who was put in the cell thinks to him self. 'well after seeing my own handiwork i might just pat my self on the back. I have surpassed the gun wall. leaving a nice handiwork for jakekim. I wonder how will he see the wall what will be look on his face. will he still try to surpass me or will he give up. anyway i am done with my legend. Now we will see how far can little daniel go',

After the school is over crystal saying her goodbyes to zoe. mira. zack. yui. As then she lefts to go to her home. As then after reaching it. She goes to sleep. As then she wakes up in the second body like daniel. As then we also see crystal also has 2 bodies. As then crystal receives a call on her phone seeing the name. she immediately picks up the phone.

 As then she hears an old ruff voice with authority on the other side of the phone. As then the voice asks "Did you got in contact with the target". As then she replies "no father. he is no longer available in school. As i found out he was sent to detention center for". she explains all what she knows "when was he sent their ". As then after hearing this she replies 8 days. have passed.

As then the voice says "ok. keep going to the school. i will look into the matter of the target". As then after hearing her father reply of seeing the matter she says "father don't. He will be out in a month as then me and some other friends are going to visit him on the weekends" .

As then she hears "what i do does not concern you. and your not old enough to order me what to do or what not to do. remember it". As then she says "ok father". the call is then cut

As then we look on the other side of the phone. We see the owner of the voice. an old man with white hair and wrinkles on his face. as he is also missing an arm his eyes are closed no one knows what he is thinking now but whatever he is thinking. does concern the daniel park. As then after zooming out a bit we see on his desk many photos of both little and big daniel.

As then he looks at the pictures and says to himself 'interesting. How can the second body move on it's own. what are you daniel park how can you do it. How can both bodies move at the same time. Well i might have to visit you to get the answers i want, we will meet soon daniel park. soon'. 

As then little daniel who was training with james sneezes. As then his again hit on the head by james using a ruler. and saying "oye where are you focusing. focus on the subject". As then daniel rubbing his head and gathers a little courage to ask "ahem excuse me but why am i studying . extreme mathematics and many other languages. was i not suppose to learn how to fight. but why am i learning all these subjects.". 

As then he is again hit on the head with the ruler as james says "even a old man can fight better then you. So i thought i will make good use of your empty head and stuff some knowledge in your empty head". As the he asks again "but why am i learning extreme maths and other things, why not you just teach me how to fight". As then he is again hit in the head but this time he dodges as then he looks at james with a smug look.

james seeing daniel smug look goes for another ruler hit but this time using IA. As then daniel who could not see how ruler hit him again. rubs his head as now 3 different bumps are on it. while rubbing.

he hears james saying "listen here kid am not only here to teach you how to fight. But i wanna teach you everything i know. you must have seen the trophy room right. I did it all just cause i was bored. Now i am also bored again. so am teaching you all the things i picked up. randomly. so you can also make a room dedicated by school to keep all the trophies. And also what is the use of fighting if you cannot solve the calculus and make fast calculation on seeing your opponents moves and punches". 

As then daniel gets stars in his eyes and says "so your saying if i learn maths i can also fight". no As then hearing this form james puts cold water on his hope. As then hears "i was bored again so i picked teaching you. math's and other things".

As then daniel starts murmuring under his tone. As then he hears james saying " you got a problem with my teaching style". As daniel can swear he can see some red and black aura coming off james. As then he denies nodding his head sideways faster. saying "No i love maths i also like how you teach".

James asks a maths question which daniel fails to answer earning him another ruler on his head. As then daniel is cursing system for putting him in this situation. As then system using daniel big body sneezes saying "who is talking bad about me. anyway". system using big body is in a small cell in the detention center. As he is meditating. 

Story ends here

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