Chárter 1
'' to speak (''it makes sense'')
'' for thinking ('wants to set me up')
{<>} for skill use ({skill <bersek(A)> is being used})
[""] for telepathic speaking (["you have to come back"])
** for character actions (*crazy bitch screaming sounds*)
📃✍️ Means a correction of an error.
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Pov nobody:
In a forest where birds prepare for the coming of the day and as the fading moonlight shimmers
Alex:'...ha..ha..ha..ha'.
Where only the sound of insects and the wind blowing through the trees can be heard.
Adventurer 2: "don't let him escape he is heading north!!!"
A *figure* could be seen panting heavily as it ran through the forest.
Alex:'...ha...ha...just...a...little...bit...more...'
Ah, yes, that *figure* that was running at full speed at this moment, would be none other, than our MC, also known as Alexander Dracula, or as I like to call him, Alex.
Alex:'... ha... come on... not missing.... A lot... Haa'
Oh, right and how can we forget the level 2 and 3 adventurers along with their level 4 leader who are chasing him.
adventurer 1:"Lider is heading for the cliff, what should we do?"
Leader of the adventurers:"Make a perimeter, guide him there."
The leader of the adventurers ordered his men, as if he were moving pieces on a chessboard.
Alex:'... ha... Ha?'
When alex turned around to see his pursuers, he was a little surprised that they seemed to be retreating, and he saw a little hope, hope that he could get out of this bad situation he was in, oh poor alex, if you remember that naivety of yours, was what got you into this mess in the first place.
But soon that flame of hope was extinguished.
No, it would be better to say, it was stomped on.
Alex:".. What the... No... You must be kidding me!"
Alex exclaimed after seeing the huge abyss that was a few steps away from him.
*sounds of footsteps*.
Alex's body paled and his heart stopped beating every time he heard that simple, rhythmic sound.
*sounds of clapping*.
Slowly Alex turned around to see *that* or rather, those people he was supposed to have escaped from, right in front of his eyes.
*sounds of cliché evil laughter*.
Adventurer 1:"HAHAHAHAHA, leader, you saw the look on his face, he thought he had gotten away from us HAHAHAHAHA"
Adventurer 2: "HAHAHAHAHAHAHA and it's not just that, look at the face he's making, the guy looks like he's going to pee HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"
Adventurer leader: "silence, and let me correct you Bob (Adventurer 2), that thing you see there is not human."
*uncomfortable silence*
As if processing what their leader had just said they fell silent.
After what seemed like hours, which in reality was a mere 2 minutes one of the adventurers decided to ask.
Adventurer 3: "isn't he human? I mean look at him even though he's full of cuts and skinny he's still handsome, hell he even looks better than some gods and that's something, imagine if he was in his best shape, maybe even Willam likes him (adventurer 1), but besides that he doesn't look, nothing out of the ordinary".
MC currently(only about 5 times worse, barely clothed and skinny, no left arm and no right eye with dried blood inside it, but you get the point)
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After the comment about William, obviously the gey of the group, nodded in agreement, when Alex saw that he felt a cold sweat drop down his back.
After that scene, the leader proceeded to explain what he had just said.
Leader of the adventurers: "the point is that our contractor gave an exquisite reward for this monster, it seems that this freak feeds on blood and gets stronger with it, we were lucky that he had run out of it, look how he ran without falna, nor magic stone like the moustros, the only thing that powers him apparently is the blood, It seems that somehow he snuck into the labyrinth, where the Hera and Zeus families found him in the middle of starting his foray to the deep floors feeding on other monsters, but when they approached to catch him he transformed into little flying moustros and escaped to the surface, we were lucky to get him, we will be rewarded big time."
At that moment all the adventurers lost any kind of emotion towards this *thing*, there was only disgust, and who wouldn't, adventurers kill monsters and monsters kill adventurers, and if an adventurer is told that a monster takes an appearance equal to that of a person, that's the only thing they could feel towards that existence, disgust, pure and simple disgust.
As the adventurers thought of ways to torture the *thing*.
In the adventurers' leader's head only one sentence was going through, that if Alex heard it, he would jump to kill it even if it was the last thing he would do.
Leader of the adventurers: 'easy money'.
Meanwhile, Alex, in all this conversation that was happening in front of him, could only think.
Alex: 'How the fuck did I get into all this?
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