Golden_Slime
The MC is giving his clan jutsus left and right to anyone who ask for it, the MC is a ****1ng b1tch to the hokage I mean he(hokage) ask the MC to share his clan jutsus to another village that's just like a hyuuga taking his eye out to give it to a kumo nin, a uchiha giving away their eyes, an akimichi giving their Yang jutsus to the Iwa, and what does the MC say? NOTHING he just go and obeys like a b1tch that wants to please his master and the author said that the MC just want the village hidden in the leaf to be strong when it still has ****1ng MINATO, KUSHINA, TSUNADE, FUGAKU AND THE ENTIRE UCHIHA AND UZUMAKI CLAN!!!
Beta(Stupid/Retard) MC he gets Two techniques of both Yin & Yang. By mastering Yin Technique Uchiha can awaken Rennegan. and by mastering Yang technique Senju can awaken Wood release. This stupid guy(MC) gives away techniques like candy. Fûck and there is an uzumaki women to whom MC gives Techniques and she ended up being Hokage's spy. Reading up to that point I feel like I'm burning by Brain Cells.
First, this is a good fanfiction about a guy isekai into a body with Kaguya and hyuuga bloodline(A 7year old kid actually), where he is orphan for a good reason and journey to Konoha while collecting subordinate. It's a good idea for Naruto fanfiction, with good command of English,symbols, space, build up, plot, character and paragraph. I can definitely say that while it's not the best fanfiction, it definitely good enough for me and my standard is average, meaning all average reader and above will love it with slightly more picky will at most complain about the wish.. Thank you author and sorry for not able to give more detailed review.
writing quality (4 star) : good enough to read and at least unnoticeable grammar error for me story development (4 star) : good, the author not following the canon but not engaging enough to read. character design (2 star) : mc basically is doormat of konoha and other character is good for me but not the mc updating stability (4 star) : daily update world background (5 star) : good, idk what to say. if you can ignore pseudo slave mc this fanfic is good to read if not just don't read it it's not worth your time to read this shit, well at least there is no NTR (netorare).
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dont waste your time on this fic if your easily angered mc makes stupid decisions and i a lap dog of konoah update time is not looking good writing quality is ok world background is fives stars (because it is naruto ) I dont like the story development character design is neat it had potential but its wasted SMH if you are a veteran webnovel reader i dont recommend it it will gt boring easily for beginners so yeah