35 Rewrite Complete

Well, I'm back in business. The changes aren't that major but do read it to get used to the changes. Also, do comment anywhere you all find any errors.

As for the summary of changes,

MC's name is Ryan

MC now has imagine breaker

Dumbles is even more shady

... yea, that's it. Underwhelming, but it took a while to edit. See you guys soon.

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Oh, I forgot. Peter Pettigrew is not hiding as a rat but is hero.