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Reviews of Immortal Domination : White Emperor

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Immortal Domination : White Emperor

Daoist_Xuyi

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EMPERORS
EMPERORSLv12EMPERORS

I like the storyline and the MC i recommended this novel to my friends and they like it but the novel is drop or not is still unknown i hope the author still can continue this novel and if it drop please tell the reader because when author drop the novel and not tell the reader that make the reader have high hope an make the reader always wait

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Morvian
MorvianLv6Morvian

WQ - 5star since for me your skill in writing is good, basically I always give 5 star to every author who's talent in writing is more than me since I'm trash in writing. SU - Update release is better than me so 5star again, hopefully you will stay like thay for your reader. SD - Story is .... well since the plot is so cliches, if I was you I'll write the system using emergency method to absorb poison into MC's body and change MC constitutes into that poison or yin body. this worsened when you kill his father but reaction from MC is quite lacking since MC saying himself that he didn't even know them enough to feel close. how will he feel close if they died early lol?~ so 3star CD - almost same with above, since I read him being jerk like that when his father death and he just ' ah father, too bad we didn't that close and my feeling for my parents is almost non-existent and only guilt feeling left he has for his parents. lastly he's hiding his true ability so its 3 star since this is overused method. I know it since he want to be stronger first before being open that he's strong but that poison should prevent him being able to cultivate but he's clearly telling them he can cultivate but he's hiding his real power to a girl that want to protect him!~ if I was him, I'll tell her my real power so she can be at ease and I'll tell her not to have mindset protecting me since she would be target of his enemy later. WB - not much but since I'm being biased on 2 category into 3 star, so I'll give this 4star to make my overall review into 4 star!!~ since myself is author always get harsh critic so I know how you feel if the review giver is being too much jerk!~ Suggestions, later if you make another novel!~ don't use overused plot and cliches, since so many people will drop it midway!~ make your own style so your novel will be unique!~

Daoist_Xuyi
Daoist_XuyiAuthorDaoist_Xuyi

Hello! My fellow Daoists, Author here. I've been advised by beggar Li to shamelessly rate my novel. Meanwhile, I'd like to use this chance to thank you all for your support!!!

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. 😎😎

Dovah_Bone
Dovah_BoneLv14Dovah_Bone

The story is just greate. Greate world building, character design and development of the story. Although the chapter update is a little strange.

Daoist198784
Daoist198784Lv4Daoist198784

The plot is as cliche as possible. As elsewhere, mother mc was poisoned and dies during childbirth. And everyone considers mc to be garbage, they despise it everywhere, there is a girl who is the only one in the clan who cares about him. Born in the lowest world. I did not even try to read further.

chriswo2
chriswo2Lv14chriswo2

Power system to complicated you need to print it out and look at it every time someone’s stage is mentioned and compare. ruins the whole book

Verae
VeraeLv4Verae

I was surprised when I found a fanfiction based on age of wushu Really loved that game. Still does somehow but it's been a while since I stopped playing it. Nice fanfic idea tho keep going pls you are doing great

Sin_of_Lust
Sin_of_LustLv12Sin_of_Lust

Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

The_Unholy_One
The_Unholy_OneLv13The_Unholy_One

I really like the story so keep up the great work _____________________________________________________________________________________________&__&&_____

five_royalty
five_royaltyLv1five_royalty

Amazing novel from characters to the plot background and progression. Personaly I advocate for the author to continue with the novel as it is just not fair for an awesome work to be introduced then discontinued, that in itself is a crime. Authur, please continue the novel.🥺🥺🥺🥺

Reykun
ReykunLv12Reykun

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Noob_Writer
Noob_WriterLv4Noob_Writer

Hahahaha the story is pretty awesome but it lacks a bit of something but in time I'm sure author_san will figure it out so I rated 5 out of 5 for future preparations so please don't disappoinment me.

KiranTor3333
KiranTor3333Lv3KiranTor3333

An enjoyable story. Looking forward to more chapters. If I were to be critical of anything it would be the odd capitalizations in the middle of sentences and the lack of capitalization of Bie He’s given name. However, you’ve got a great story here.