DutyCalls
I think the story is good but needs a bit more world building. So far the audience doesn't know to much about the world to really understand what is happening. These are common problems when writing in first person. But I love all the characters and how they interact. I wish there was more of Ethan view on things like how he would describe everything more in his head as the narrator but I love him as a character and I'm so curious about what will happen next.
Hi, This is Nelly, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions. After reading your story "I woke up in the Prince's bed?!", I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there is so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via nellycrilly@outlook.com, then I should take the opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Nelly
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