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I think the story is good but needs a bit more world building. So far the audience doesn't know to much about the world to really understand what is happening. These are common problems when writing in first person. But I love all the characters and how they interact. I wish there was more of Ethan view on things like how he would describe everything more in his head as the narrator but I love him as a character and I'm so curious about what will happen next.

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I woke up in the Prince's bed?!

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