Anna_07
The words and sentences are written are clear and understandable. The story itself carries out a well-developed plot that arouses the curiosity of the readers. It feels really good to read a story like this. and after a long while, I feel like I want a spoiler about what's going to happen next. I cant wait to see the next chapter. Author, you are so talented. please write more and more in the future.
This novel is just wonderful. Despite the need for improvement in the writing and its structure, the story is still enjoyable. The moment I started reading the first chapter, I instantly remembered novels about self-discovery, like “The Alchemist” for example, and truly this did not disappoint. It’s clear. It’s precise. It knows what it wants to tell you and does exactly that. Great work! 👏