UnliMegane
This was an awesome book, definitely not what I'm used to since I prefer fantasy and romance. This is a Sci-fi, medieval twist based novel. Excellent writing and perfect description of characters. For a character who thought he was ordinary, wasn't so ordinary at all. Great book. Short and sweet and descriptive.
Overall your story is great; it’s written well, and the story is interesting. The only suggestion I have would be to have a chapter where all the sci-fi names/machinery are listed and explained (much like how FCS was explained in chapter 14 iirc). Or make guide us into familiarity by allowing us to grasp each new abbreviation before introducing another term. I love sci-fi, but even this was a little hard for me too follow in the later chapters. The scene with the old man and police officer was rather funny; I would’ve commented, but it kept loading! Anyway, will be following this!
I must say... I'm surprised. It's hard to see a novel about a person going from a less advanced world to a high advenced one. Usually is the other way around. I like it. Only a few grammar error here and there, but what really hooked me up was the interaction between the characters, it was fluid and...human, something quite difficult to find in some novels. Not many forced dialogues. I had a good time reading it, and if you like sci-fi, you might enjoy it.
As the title implies, the villager goes from fantasy to sci-fi! And it's not the same as a certain strange trap who uses mechas in a fantasy world! The author actually uses science fiction elements! It's really interesting in regards to how book 1 went (won't spoil for anyone). If you like sci-fi and are tired of normal reincarnation to fantasy, join Megane-san's journey as he continues this unique story! >3</
Decided to be shameless and post a five star review, just cause I can lol. Kidding aside, hope you guys out there do try the novel out. It still has problems and kinks I need to work on, but I'm confident enough to guarantee that the grammar is above average, despite my weakness in using punctuation marks hehe. It's SciFi and Fantasy mashed together, but with a twist. It has Mecha too. Do check it out. And please leave some reviews if you have the time. I'll appreciate some feedback. Any kind of feedback! I'm that desperate lol. Cheers y'all.
The plot is amazing, it fans out smoothly over the chapters. I was instantly hooked after reading first few chapters. The character development and writing proficiency is good, except for a few grammatical errors here and there. Will readily recommend it to readers if they are interested in sci fi and adventurous plots like this one. Keep up the good work 👍
This is a really interesting story so far! I like the similarities between Ryuu and the MC before he fell into the "rabbit hole" (they both have a little sister that worries about them ^~^)! The writing is phenomenal, there wasn't any grammar mistakes at all! The writing and story flows very smoothly, and the pace is really nice~ I like that it's in 1st POV, something I haven't encountered before in WN c: The update stability is also really nice, it seems to be updated every 1-2 days which is awesome, especially for a new book! Very interesting story that people should check out if they like the science fiction genre~ Hoping for the best!
Hey guys. This here is my first work posted here on webnovel.com. As I am still very new to writing, I'd appreciate any feedback for my work, positive or otherwise. Please do give it a try. It may not appeal to everyone, I would like to try making it a somewhat unique reading experience. Thanks in advance guys and gals.
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