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TWDeMented

TWDeMented

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old man who likes to read a good book

2019-01-15 JoinedUnited States
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented14d
    Commented

    still reading... waiting for more

    Ch 96 What Is God?
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    I'll Be The Hero That I Want To Be
    Fantasy · FalseFace
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented15d
    Posted

    I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent. it has the feel of direct translation with no polish. so. writer do not give up on this. I look forward to read more.

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    Illicit Relationship in Magic world
    Fantasy · NITIN_ZARCs
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented25d
    Commented

    good chapter but could you please correct the he and she. they break up the read

    Ch 32 chapter 32: "We're family"
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    I was reborn as the 3rd prince
    Fantasy · Terlik
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    I thank you for another great chapter

    Ch 242 Ancient Sentinel of The Moon
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    The Harvester
    Fantasy · AhraManyu
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Replied to _oinkchan

    I ask because I started writing a story and need pointers

    Ch 150 New Subscribers
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    wevwjwvwjqwv
    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter. I really like your story so far, but I must ask how do you do it?

    Ch 150 New Subscribers
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    wevwjwvwjqwv
    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter. I really enjoy your writing. How do you do it thought?

    Ch 162 Chapter One Hundred and Sixty-Two: How to Proceed
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    Ero Skill Tree
    Fantasy · ohhdearme
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Replied to Dame_ningen1

    I am sorry that the chapters are to short I aim for 1k words each chapter .

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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Replied to BASTILLE

    I thank you for the answer . I did add it but I am not going to go over board in its use. I don't want a stupid or lazy MC so it is there to enhance his body only

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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Posted

    Well to be honest I read alot if the book once before and liked it and now that I have re-read all 140 chapters that have been released I still like it but some things that got left out to me helped the story more then hindered it. but over all a good read. Keep the Chapters coming.

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    wevwjwvwjqwv
    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    I know it can be hard to not take to hart what haters say but please I beg you don't let them destroy your story

    Ch 38 Teaching the kitten, how to say meow.**
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    wevwjwvwjqwv
    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    so far I enjoy your novel and hope for more chapters. Do not give up and have faith in yourself.

    Ch 32 Chapter 32 - Erotic Bath (R-18)
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    A Lewd Story
    Fantasy · Draky_Vampire
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Posted

    This book shows great thought being put into it. I hope the writer will keep up there creation. The biggest draw back is the gender changes on Characters. Like Kin and Gin are they both boys or is one a boy and the other Girl since one is from an Emperor fungi and the other is an Empress fungi? Please if it not to much extra work can we keep it straight on all Characters?

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    Seven Sins Demon Fox
    Fantasy · LorienRenard
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    thank you so much for your wonderful work

    Ch 139 It's Normal
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    The Harvester
    Fantasy · AhraManyu
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    I have a thought about somethings. please double check genders when writing. it is simple mistake made by many but it might help in the future.

    Ch 29 Side Story 3 : Origin of Angela
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    Handsome enough to have a harem even if MC don't want it.
    Fantasy · NxtDoorDuDE
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    this is a great story keep up the good work

    Ch 14 Chapter 4-3: Distracting Ourselves to Cope
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    Innocent Devil's Harem
    Fantasy · KaizerWolf
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented2yr
    Commented

    ok... it may have taken me 4 days but I am all caught up and in need of more chapters. Thank you for all that you have written so far. I look forward to more.

    Ch 69 Last Hurdle
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    Septem
    Fantasy · Alex_Destro
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented3yr
    Commented

    need more please

    Ch 61 Chapter 59: I Confronted My ‘Shadow Guard’
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    Living the Great Sage Life with my Fairies and Lovers in a New World
    Fantasy · Orange_Rain
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented3yr
    Commented

    all caught up now I need more...PLEASE

    Ch 134 Time to escape from the ant nest
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    Summoned and Unwanted
    Fantasy · VisualKoFey
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  • TWDeMented
    TWDeMented3yr
    Commented

    great work and love the build up

    Ch 110 Chapter 110: Confrontation
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    The Legacy System
    Fantasy · crazy_immortal
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