Reviews of I HATE LOVE YET I LOVE YOU

honestly the story seems good and all but the quality of the writing is not very good. a editor would be good. hmu and i can help u edit your novels until u get a editor yourself

This author does a nice job building interesting characters and introducing the reader to their worlds. This story is fun and will keep you entertained and wanting more! [img=recommend]

Good job author. Such a beautiful novel you've got going. I love all the characters and their personality. Looking forward to read more from you. Thumps up.

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This is what my rating is. I understand that it is really difficult to translate here. Too much! I like Geli and Red, I like the personality of the two of them so I like the flow of the story, I hope it ends soon, dear writer! I do not see that you do not know how to write. Honestly, it's beautiful. Just keep up the good work and make sure, someone finds it! Like me ^ _ ^ Good luck!

Foreword: Don't be saddened by this review! I enjoyed reading your book! However, there are some things that can be fixed! 1. Your dialogue formatting could be a lot better! 2. Try for descriptions of the setting and the character more often! That will elevate the writing. I enjoyed the dynamics behind the the two main characters. It's fun to read. Geli's and Red's interactions are great. I also liked the tic you introduced. (E.g. Geli likes moon milk tea.) Overall, this has potential! You can do it! Sincerely, CodeW

Hi author, i read the first chapter of the book. Giving a candid feedback. Few tips from what i received as an author as well. 1. You can try taking help of editors to help you with the writing part. 2. Reread your own chapters before publishing. I follow this practice with my novels. I re-read my chapters multiple times before publishing. 3. I was looking for a Synopsis. A good synopsis will boost the story plot 4. This tip i miss it in my story many times. World background.

This story should read by all people😍 I really love all the characters you have, author! I love their personality! Please keep on posting a new chapters, I am willing to wait for your up coming cjapters. Like Oh my gosh!!! I really love this book! I will say that you are a really good writer! That was a really nice one. You captured my attention, author. Keep it up!😘

This story add a conclusion on m mind that, 'why did they end up going rivalry?' But then I realized, in reality not ll the same attitude are perfect pair, they really became rivalry. But I did not expect these kind of situation. What a good book, Miss Author! Please post an update!