Review Detail of CodeW in I HATE LOVE YET I LOVE YOU

Foreword: Don't be saddened by this review! I enjoyed reading your book! However, there are some things that can be fixed! 1. Your dialogue formatting could be a lot better! 2. Try for descriptions of the setting and the character more often! That will elevate the writing. I enjoyed the dynamics behind the the two main characters. It's fun to read. Geli's and Red's interactions are great. I also liked the tic you introduced. (E.g. Geli likes moon milk tea.) Overall, this has potential! You can do it! Sincerely, CodeW