Chapter 1-The beginning(Fixed)
How are you, here is chapter 1 corrected, sorry for the terrible writing of the chapters, I hope you like this change.
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Darkness and silence were the only things the young man felt. After speaking with the old man, he felt a sense of calmness, so he wasn't worried about disappearing. But now, he only sees darkness and cannot hear anything. However, he can feel a sensation of warmth, where he is being cared for and feels secure that nothing will happen to him.
The young man started to feel sleepy and drifted off to sleep. He couldn't do anything, so he simply slept. He doesn't know how long he has been asleep, but he feels calm and has no worries. However, that calmness was interrupted because he began to see a light.
He couldn't distinguish what it was, but it was a bright light. He began to feel like someone was pulling him out gently, careful not to harm him. This lasted for a moment, and finally, he emerged, feeling cold all over his body. He could move his arms and legs, but not perfectly. He could hear various sounds but couldn't recognize them.
Suddenly, he felt a blanket or cloth covering him carefully. They were cleaning him, then wrapped him in a blanket and handed him to his mother. Satoru was trying to open his eyes; they felt heavy, but he didn't give up.
Gradually, his eyes began to respond, and it didn't take long for him to open them. The first thing he saw was a wooden ceiling, perhaps. He didn't know what it was made of. Then he looked down and saw a person in front of him. This person wore white clothing and a cap with a cross.
Satoru recognized her immediately by her attire; she was a nurse. He felt like someone was watching him and turned to his left to see a beautiful woman sweating profusely. Her face showed how tired she was, but despite the fatigue, she wore a beautiful smile of joy and excitement.
This woman is Satoru's mother, who has just given birth. She is excited to see her beautiful baby in her hands, unable to express the emotion she is feeling. Satoru could feel the emotions his mother was experiencing at that moment. He wanted to say something, but his body was not developed for that yet, so he simply showed a warm smile.
The woman became even more excited when she saw her baby smile. She thought the baby recognized her as his mother, but it was more than that. Satoru gave her a warm smile not only because she is his mother in this life but also because she resembles his mother from his past life, whom he lost.
Both the woman and Satoru were very happy. One because she had given birth to a beautiful baby, and the other because he was with his family again. No one can resist in this situation. While Satoru was thinking, the door to the room suddenly opened, and a man entered immediately.
This man was tall and muscular, with a lumberjack beard and mustache. His hair was dark but with a few gray strands, and he was sweating profusely as if he had run a marathon.
And he was right; the man had been working, but when he received the news that his wife had given birth, he rushed to the hospital immediately. When he opened the room, he saw his wife lying on a bed, sweating and with a pale face from the effort of giving birth. But in her arms, he saw a beautiful baby with the most beautiful blue eyes he had ever seen in his life.
He couldn't contain his emotion and went to hug his wife and their new son. He thanked his wife for giving him a son, took his son so his wife could rest for a while. Holding his son, he could see how beautiful he looked and could be sure he would find a beautiful woman to be his wife.
But what surprised him the most was his eyes. They were light blue as if they were a jewel or like the clear sky where you could sit and watch the sky peacefully forever. He showed a warm smile to his son, and Satoru returned the smile because the man in front of him resembled his father from his past life.
He began to feel tired, so he closed his eyes and fell asleep again. Time passed, and he woke up, looked around, and saw that he was in a sort of crib next to his mother's bed, who was sleeping to rest.
Satoru was happy for this new life and being able to see his family again. While he was grateful for this, a note appeared in front of him, floating. It was folded, but gradually began to unfold and opened completely. It was empty, but letters began to appear, so he began to read it.
[Hello Satoru, I hope you were born well and healthy. Well, I hope you enjoy this new life. I think you've already seen the surprise I told you about, right? Hehe. How about seeing your family again? Well, now, the important part of this news: first, at what time were you born? Who knows, that's a surprise, so find out and enjoy the adventure.]
[Secondly, at the moment, the six eyes are not awake. You might wonder why; well, that's simple. Since you've just arrived in this world, your soul is still delicate and won't be able to withstand this power. Also, since the six eyes are from another world, it will take some time before the world adapts to the six eyes. More enemies might appear, or something might appear to balance this power.]
[Third, now that you are Satoru Gojo, you will also have his techniques and fighting abilities. But for that, you'll have to train to become as strong as him. Also, since this world is composed of mana, it might be a bit difficult for you to use the techniques, but don't worry. Cursed energy is also in this world, only in very small amounts. Mana and cursed energy are two types of energy, positive and negative, both exist in almost all worlds, sometimes one is stronger than the other.]
[Here, you can use both for Satoru's techniques and the spells from the grimoire. Of course, you'll have to figure out how to use both types of energy because if you don't control them, it might affect your small body. So, I wish you the best of luck in this new life, and enjoy it a lot. If anything else happens in the future, I'll send you a message in the future, so goodbye.]
That was all the note contained. After fulfilling its mission of delivering the message to Satoru, it began to burn and disappeared, leaving no trace of ash or anything; it was as if it had never existed.
After reading the note, Satoru realized that even though he is very strong, he will have to train to become stronger. He will also have to figure out how to use the techniques and use his brain in addition to the six eyes to see how to use all his power. But that's for later, because there's no need to stress.
He had just been born, so he enjoyed this new life a little. He let out a small smile and fell asleep again, making a promise that in this new life, he would protect his family, make several friends, go on adventures, help the characters in the story a bit, fall in love, have a family, but above all, defeat the final boss so that everything would be peaceful. Slowly, he fell asleep, and now, only a cute baby sleeping could be seen.
But while Satoru was in his beautiful dream, in another part of the world, in an abandoned house, a person was sitting in a chair, reviewing certain papers, but at that moment, they felt a fluctuation of energy from the world.
"The balance has shifted, the world's equilibrium has changed, something strong has appeared, and the world is adapting. I'll have to check my plans again."
They set aside the papers and looked out the window at the night sky where the moon was shining.
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<Author: I hope you like the changes I'm making and keep supporting story>