Makh
honestly, pretty good story, but not my cup of tea, in my opinion, the character wasn't developed well enough and the guy skipped 16 years of training, and in my opinion, memories and experience are two very different things same with knowledge, so not training for those 16 years your self without specifically wishing for certain things, is not all that realistic, and the character is tooooooo over powered and completely upsets the balance though you can fix that quite easily by doing some world building. so this is my opinion thus far.