I just saw some games of a shaco pro, and I thought he was the biggest troll in the world, I just verified that he is the second, the author beats him

gengar night black? perfect assasin

There are many expert writers around here, but they never write. A tip if you are starting, make a rough draft about the different arcs you plan to make, and do about 10 chapters before publishing them. From experience I tell you, then you want to change something 50 times because you find a better idea. I am also quite bad and I have not dared to publish anything at the moment. Don't let it, everyone has made mistakes at the beginning.

sekirei is good

yeah, best piplup

estoy usando el traductor de google y se lee perfectamente y sin fallos, no seais tan trolls anda

I don't usually comment, I just wanted to tell the author not to get carried away by unsubstantiated or hurtful comments, since the people who write these things are people who like it and they should not leave it aside for 4 fools who insult or believe problems because they get bored

bastante buena la historia , no es algo que no se halla hecho ya , pero esta muy bien escrita, utilizo el traducor automatico para leerlo y es perfectamente legible. Me estan gustanto los pequeños giros que esta tomando y como el autor se preocupa por el paisaje mundial, pero sin recargarlo tanto. lo unico de lo que se puede quejar 1 es la velocidad de lanzamiento, pero eso siempre pasa y seguira pasando si te engancha algo y has de esperar.