"This, this…" Kasumigaoka Utaha was speechless for a moment, and then realized that she was so excited that she blurted it out, and with her suddenly starting to write on her laptop, she ended up confirming her identity with the author of the novel.
Now, no matter what excuse she gives, it is impossible to reverse this situation.
While Utaha was panicking, Wu Shen flipped through the manuscript in her hands. When Wu Shen guessed that the author was Utaha, she almost should have realized that Wu Shen knew the truth. It's like a layer of window paper that neither side has broken through.
"Wu Shen-kun…" The secret was revealed without any psychological preparation, Utaha was very nervous and nervous at first. But when things go to extremes, they must be reversed. When shame reaches the extreme, the next step is dark mode.
Feeling the dark aura appearing around Kasumigaoka Utaha again, Wu Shen still said calmly, "I think this novel is very well written and the author should be proud of it."
Utaha's poisonous tongue had already reached the maximum level, but it was blocked by Wu Shen's words.
"Don't worry, Kasumigaoka-san. Since you wanted this to be kept secret, I don't mind keeping quiet about it either. I won't tell others that Kasumigaoka-san is a light novel author and high school student . Anyway, I already know, this novel I will continue to be a commentator."
"Thank you very much for your help, but this situation is so shameful. Wu Shen-kun, do you want to experience what true despair is?" Utaha smiled and it felt like it was as warm as if she was bathing in the spring breeze, but when Wu Shen was stared at like that, he felt as if he had fallen into an extremely cold cave.
I must say that a pretty girl is still a pretty girl even if she is angry. She has red cheeks, gently combing her hair due to nervousness, an irritated and somewhat shy expression, and her graceful legs wrapped in black tights. Crossed again to reveal a perfect curved composition.
"I won't feel despair or anything like that. Let's take a look at your new novel." Wu Shen quickly changed the subject, otherwise perhaps Utaha would really fulfill her promise and let him experience what true despair is.
"Let's see, remember to give me some advice after reading it, Wu Shen-kun, Queen M's light novel critic."
"Can you stop using such a shameful name, Miss. Kasumigaoka?"
"Didn't you call me a pretty girl and a high school light novel writer?" Utaha still had a soft smile.
"Ahaha…"
He did something wrong to himself! Wu Shen's heart filled with tears.
He focused again on the content of the novel in his notebook. If there was a word he didn't understand, he would ask Utaha to pronounce it. Wu Shen quickly consulted the dictionary and finally finished reading the opening half of the newly written chapter.
The setting, characters, settings, and style remain largely unchanged. The only change is that the second heroine who was supposed to appear in the second volume was moved directly to the first volume and started a head-on confrontation with the first heroine.
In just half a chapter, Wu Shen felt the entanglement of the protagonists, as if Utaha was whispering to himself between the lines: "Brother, please give me a bottle of stomach medicine." But this second heroine, when Kasumigaoka Utaha introduced her, did not appear in the future second volume.
In the future described by Utaha, the second volume still tells the sweet daily life of the male and female protagonist, and then the relationship is the happy and perfect ending like a fairy tale.
But I don't know if it was a big scam, but the second volume of Utaha's novel was extremely poorly written and there were negative reviews almost everywhere on the Internet.
After that, Utaha fell into despair and took a long time to regain her energy. As for the reason for the enthusiasm, little Mai said that the opportunity came from him. Wu Shen thought in his heart.
Although Wu Shen could have done nothing and maintained the original course of the story, waiting until the novel was cut in half and when Utaha was lost, he could restore the story described by Mai to comfort her and gain her favor.
But Wu Shen didn't want to see her lost and sad at all.
"Yes, if you write it this way, readers won't think it's a cliché story at first glance. The next step is to see which side readers will take. I'm really looking forward to the real partisan fight."
"For being able to find such a solution, I sometimes feel that you are quite naughty, Wu Shen-kun." Utaha closed her laptop and put it back in her bag as she expressed her own opinion.
"We can write this kind of light novel, I'm sure it will develop a lot of popularity among readers." Wu Shen said with a smile, a very "complicit" feeling.
When the two finished talking about the topic of romance, the sky outside had completely darkened, the sun was setting, and the street lights turned on one after another. At the same time, the silver-white crescent moon rises, emitting a faint silver-white halo.
Night arrived silently inadvertently.
What should I make for dinner tonight? Am I more anxious than Mai-chan? Wu Shen unconsciously started thinking about what to cook at night.
At this moment, Wu Shen suddenly remembered that Mai stayed at home and stood up from the chair with a sudden movement.
He looked at his phone and saw that it was almost 7 o'clock. Although it wasn't too late, Wu Shen accidentally forgot to tell Mai that he would be home late today!
"What's wrong? What happened?" Utaha saw Wu Shen's obvious anxious expression and asked.
"Sorry, I need to go home quickly. I forgot to tell Mai-chan that I'll be home late today. She should still be waiting for me alone." Wu Shen paused and explained "Mai-chan is the relative I told you about last time."
"It turns out that little girl is called Mai. So come back quickly and don't keep her waiting. I probably already know how to write the rest of the novel. I'll look for you after the first volume has been rewritten." Utaha spoke to Wu Shen.
"Well, leave it to me. I'll run back first." Wu Shen didn't say any more nonsense. After explaining the reason and saying goodbye quickly, Wu Shen hurried home. At the same time, I still blamed myself for forgetting something so important.
(End of chapter)
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