Reviews of Husband doting wife: Emperor Gu's shameless perfect bride
Husband doting wife: Emperor Gu's shameless perfect bride
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umm the first things first that catch my eye is how the author writes descriptively I want to be blunt.. it's quite a 'MESS' Second is how the characters are written, I didn't quite get to see their history properly and how author-san gave us info dumps in the first few chapters, we're only in the second reason but I'm already having headaches. and Third the world background it's a mess... as well. or let's just say I skipped some parts of the paragraphs so I didn't understand well. and that's the 'reason.' author-san you should have a proofreader or an editor to clean up the mess. it's good and all in all for the beginners to read.. that's just one of my few opinions and others... I'm just tired of writing. so author please notice or maybe clean some of the first few chaps and compare it to your latest written chapter see if there's a difference in writing
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Author_your story is just the unique-awesome-amazingπ½π _i really loved your novel from bottom of my heart_i mean the fl character is so-so interesting and I very much liked the fact that for goodness sake this fl is already hooked up with her life and enjoyed her life the way she wants π_if we search for one bad boy story there will exceeds limitless (with ml being arrogant , prideful, womanizer or playboy or one who bullied or harras the fl and the dumb fl foolishly fall in love with him ) but this story not just serves the justice that fl can also be play girl or arrogant or any type bad girl _but also she is such a adorable and cool shameless goddess _Even though ml is soo..in truly love with our fl or he accepts however she is or she is the first to him in any romantic way or he loves her so much _or he is sad or in grief that he is not able to be her lover in past _i am do not feel any pity or sympathy for him , I just wish good for him being together with her now and yes I liked his character & him _its just that many authors are so busy in with love story with bad boys that I feel injustice _i want that fl can be also strong bad girl or live the way she wants_i loved the character of [mo ai] and also the characters of her family or anyone related to her _ And I loved that how story is going on -till the chapter I read _And I wish good luck for your further updates , I will be waiting for your future amazing updates patiently so you can take your time for this story to make it more amazing _i wish you good health and thanks for this story _well quite a lengthy comment but I seriously appreciate your work so I am just pouring out my feelings βΊοΈ I held no grudges against any author...just that it's what I think & feel _ π
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precisely it's really amazing great with so many different challenges task into daily life nowadays. ....but sometimes can't be avoided some scheming people around the corner......greedy to jealousy towards others people's .....can't be contented of what they've in their life ......this kinds of attitude it's very trouble....even blood related have this kind of.....
