Review Detail of absolute_car11 in Husband doting wife: Emperor Gu's shameless perfect bride
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the main point of the story is great, the characters are great. the problem is the poor grammar😐. i know the author already wrote in synopsis about the poor grammar but i really hope it will improve in the following chapters😊 I'll be patient enough to continue reading this....
Husband doting wife: Emperor Gu's shameless perfect bride
Loneliest_Empress
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Even though you say English is your first language, it doesn’t guarantee your writing is grammatically correct. Your reply to the reviewer illustrates your need to improve your writing skills. The lack of proper punctuation and odd sentence structure run amuck in your story. It was difficult to understand the first chapter. The narration reads like a stream-of-conscience that needs psychiatric treatment.
Loneliest_Empress:Thank you for the review. I will correct the synopsis I must have been drunk 😎 cause I dont have poor grammar as eng is my 1st language there are only lots of typos and I'm still editing. I am sorry about the typos thank you again for the review.
I think you misunderstood what I meant. I am not perfect in grammar, no one is. I meant, my construction is absolutely great, despite the fact, that I haven't done any editing. EDITING is the only thing I have left to do. And that includes: punctuation marks where necessary, correcting some misspelling and some sentence reconstruction. bear with me ^.^