Vocabulary

Lesson Two

Vocabulary

Vocabulary is also very important in an Action-Packed story. When I say, "Vocabulary." It's not necessarily the "big word" vocabulary definition.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary is different words to define a word. "Clobber" is a different word for hammer or punch. "Punt" is a different word for kick.

It also helps you make your story longer, and better. Because, the more different words you add, the more it describes. Plus, it adds fun into making the story. For example:

The Man in the Black Suit: Fighting the Enemy

I held my gun, and he held his. "So you remember me," he said. "Yes," I said. "You killed my family, you took me!" The man punched me. I kicked him. He pushed me and punched me. I punched him and stomped on him. He fell. "Die!!"

At that point, you've fallen asleep. It's the same words all over again. Punch, kick, punch, kick, said. You can still use those words, but use a different words to replace punch and kick other times too.

The Man in the Black Suit: Fighting the Enemy(redo)

I held the gun very tightly, and he held his. We walked around, getting ready to attack. "So you remember me," he said. "Yes," I hissed. "You killed my family, you took me!" He ran towards me, and he punched me. I fell and doubled over. As he ran towards me, I punted him. He fell onto the ground floor and shouted in agony. I got on him and rolled. We were on each other and we clobbered each other. He started choking me, and I elbowed him. He fell over the cliff. "DIE!!!!" he shouted, as he fell.

This is a better version than the last one. It is more different, describing words to put more fun to the reader.

Vocabulary is very important when making an action-packed story. It describes the words and actions of the people, it helps you enjoy the story and it interests the reader.