Reviews of Honkai Impact 3 : Transmigrate to the world of Honkai
Honkai Impact 3 : Transmigrate to the world of Honkai
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I loved this FanFic, although I don't understand much about Honkai Impact as I discovered the work a short time ago, so I can't say if it's in agreement with the original. But in terms of writing quality and the MC background it's amazing! I can't wait for the next few chapters.
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I was excited to see a honkai the I saw the yuri tag but then i saw the synopsis but when i saw the author genderbent tht MALE mc instead of just making the mc female. Meh, I Don't Understand Gender-Bent Mc's It Is One Thing With The Mc Being A Female Originally And Another A Male Being Turned Into A Female.
I can't say much as there are only three chapters so far, so far the only 'negative' point I see is writing, I understand it's not the author's first language, but author, I'll give you some advice if you want to improve your writing in English, do two things. The first, review the chapter, read and reread it before posting, after putting it in English, take paragraphs and translate it back to your language on another page to see if it's translated correctly. And secondly, after posting the chapter, many readers fix the writing errors in the comments, reading and fixing the errors also helps you improve.
