Review Detail of The_Sheep in Honkai Impact 3 : Transmigrate to the world of Honkai

I can't say much as there are only three chapters so far, so far the only 'negative' point I see is writing, I understand it's not the author's first language, but author, I'll give you some advice if you want to improve your writing in English, do two things. The first, review the chapter, read and reread it before posting, after putting it in English, take paragraphs and translate it back to your language on another page to see if it's translated correctly. And secondly, after posting the chapter, many readers fix the writing errors in the comments, reading and fixing the errors also helps you improve.