Oliver_Joseph
👌🏾 book. Best book on the platform. Nonartudtbas such a wide range of jokes installed, ranging from inside jokes to inside inside jokes to actually funny jokes. Love the installation of quad-tea. Just for the 140 words: to a different from that the only thing you need a lot of people are going to get it right away from the city center
I know that it still too early to review this novel and I also don't give a review often but this is a good story. I have one complain though. The chapter is too short for it to be a fantasy. I don't know if it is only the first chapter that is short but I hope you lengthen the word count so you can express more of the story. Thanks for the novel.
Pretty damn amazing. Let me start with very small near nonexistent downsides, you should give a physical description for the characters like sometimes saying something like Sami touched the hairs that made up his goatee or something like that. Maybe you could say Oliver leaped but didn’t realize his 5’9 stature was to big to go through the door. Something to give a good description. Also start internal conflicts. Like maybe say that alyss was always scared around people because of such a tragic event. Other wise 👌🏾
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