Reviews of Hero of The World

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Amazing. It is good story with good English. It have potential to be great story. I like Ned so far since he have good chance got various women and magic in world. I hoping that he got badass bloodline later in story

There are few grammar errors, and it needs to be proofreaded. Other than that, it has a amazing plotline, and keep up with the good work!!😄😄

Could have used some sex scenes What happened to girls in the prologue? Seemed like Ned was about to have fun until he got the powers and sh*t... pretty dissapointed!

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Great story with good world building... I was astonish that there's a lot of people reading it, but didn't comment about the chapter... Anyway, you have a great story, so do keep up since even when there's no one commenting your chapter, there's still a lot of people reading it!!! Go go go!!!

This is part of a review swap and at the time of reading, there are 24 chapters. However, writing this now as I already have a general gist of the novel. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, so any minor grammatical errors aren't noticeable to me. As long as the reading is smooth, I am happy. This is smooth enough for me. :) Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development/Character Design/World Background: The story itself is different from what I initially expected from the synopsis, so would advise the Author to change it a bit. This is more game-based like Night Ranger style, though it's not that he goes into a game. So that is what makes it different and unique for me. I've always like this sort of style, so it's a plus for me. The way it develops and progresses is also well done. It's interesting and I'm sure it'll only get better as more chapters come out (with the magic and fighting stuff, that is). All the best, Author!

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For some weird reason, this is more game based than other novels I've read. I'm digging the style though. Reminds me of Shield Hero. Keep it up!

Building chapter by chapter. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.

................................................................................................. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................

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I don't feel like giving my own novel a review is shameless, otherwise the option wouldn't be there in the first place. Still giving myself 5 starts is shameless haha. Please enjoy the story, and although i'm sure there are many mistakes, i'm doing my best to make the novel enjoyable. But in the end this story is but my starting one and with time i would get better and better. Maybe my next one would be a fanfiction :)