Review Detail of Megabread in Hero of The World

I don't feel like giving my own novel a review is shameless, otherwise the option wouldn't be there in the first place. Still giving myself 5 starts is shameless haha. Please enjoy the story, and although i'm sure there are many mistakes, i'm doing my best to make the novel enjoyable. But in the end this story is but my starting one and with time i would get better and better. Maybe my next one would be a fanfiction :)