Reviews of Haikyuu: The Guardian
Haikyuu: The Guardian
Azezzz
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- Character Design
- world background
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This would have been a excellent Haikyuu fanfiction but it is just above average. The initial idea of Mc being overpowered in Defense skills is very good Idea. But later on, author tries to involve Mc in Attack Skills and Serve Skills (by Kise's copy ability) which ruins the interesting premise (in my opinion). Mc's characterization is average. Character interactions are mostly bad, while some are good. This would been much better if Mc is OP only at Defense & slightly good at Basketball strategy.
There's still no detailed review so lemme just break it down for those who wanted to know more before actually proceeding to read. First off, this is a kind of Wish Fulfillment fanfiction. Well, fanfictions have 'fiction' in the word for a reason so that's that. Second, it's reincarnation novel with a generic trope where the MC died by getting hit by truck-kun. Well, there's a somewhat comedic twist so I guess you can check that out yourself. Third, there are wishes. A lot of them. More than one is many so you can check it out yourself just how many it is. Fourth, I know there are some who believes that the MC shouldn't just spend a wish onto someone willy nilly or give powers to someone else so I guess this novel should ring some alarm bells inside your head. For me, it's kinda illogical to spend a wish for someone that you haven't even met or interacted with for a few days, months, or even years. Humans are generally selfish creatures and majority of people should know that. Fifth, it's a Haikyuu fanfic so I decided to read it. There's no haikyuu fanfic that has more than 50+ chapters here so I tried it out. Sixth, the grammar and writing style. It's kinda weird to read since there are spaces between a quote and the line so there's that. Some minor grammatical error but mostly, it's more readable that the majority of FFs in this platform. I hope this work could further improve. Kudos to you, author-san. More power and may God Bless You!
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well uh... this is a fanfic so standards have to be lowered.... well start off with the writing Quality- its fine nothing much to be desired and you can understand it... Stability of Updates- doing really good tho this story may be dropped Story Development- haven't read that far nor am I Willing too but you can expect something along the lines of following the anime and changing something I think (never watched the anime but read some fanfics so take it with a grain of salt idk) Character Design: though I dont think its that significant but It's odd that you assume we should know how everyone looks and their personalities but I wished you actually showed more character or whatever World Background- eh... I don't really care for this one but im still rating it low, nothing's really described meh idc
