Review Detail of Pavan1234 in Haikyuu: The Guardian
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This would have been a excellent Haikyuu fanfiction but it is just above average. The initial idea of Mc being overpowered in Defense skills is very good Idea. But later on, author tries to involve Mc in Attack Skills and Serve Skills (by Kise's copy ability) which ruins the interesting premise (in my opinion). Mc's characterization is average. Character interactions are mostly bad, while some are good. This would been much better if Mc is OP only at Defense & slightly good at Basketball strategy.
Haikyuu: The Guardian
Azezzz
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To be honest that was also my initial plan, however when I was thinking about it, it felt weird as if you're only good in defense, why don't you just be a libero? But Nishinoya is already in that spot and I don't really wanna replace Nishinoya for Mc, the possible player I want to replace for Mc is Tanaka and he's a wing spiker so I decided to add more attack skill to Mc arsenal
The problem is Kise's copy ability is too overpowered. It would have been much better if > Mc is inferior to Shoyo in Spike skill & other Attack skills. > Mc is superior to Nishinoya in defense & works really hard to master to do only one special serve or some other special Basketball quirk. There is no need to replace Nishinoya. Play them both or use Rotation of players in the game. > Mc has only observation Haki but it doesn't work while playing basketball but can be used to solve Mc's personal problems outside Basketball. > Remove Kise's copy ability. If the above are too much to do > then just remove the Plot of Mc being Shoyo's twin brother but Mc transmigrated some random unknown **** just few months before Main story.
Azezzz:To be honest that was also my initial plan, however when I was thinking about it, it felt weird as if you're only good in defense, why don't you just be a libero? But Nishinoya is already in that spot and I don't really wanna replace Nishinoya for Mc, the possible player I want to replace for Mc is Tanaka and he's a wing spiker so I decided to add more attack skill to Mc arsenal
Pavan1234:The problem is Kise's copy ability is too overpowered. It would have been much better if > Mc is inferior to Shoyo in Spike skill & other Attack skills. > Mc is superior to Nishinoya in defense & works really hard to master to do only one special serve or some other special Basketball quirk. There is no need to replace Nishinoya. Play them both or use Rotation of players in the game. > Mc has only observation Haki but it doesn't work while playing basketball but can be used to solve Mc's personal problems outside Basketball. > Remove Kise's copy ability. If the above are too much to do > then just remove the Plot of Mc being Shoyo's twin brother but Mc transmigrated some random unknown **** just few months before Main story.
Azezzz:Alright I understand most of the points you were making but, what sport are you talking about?