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Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system. As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok. Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~): http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751 https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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Through The River Of Time

On the Final Shuttle, Chojusen was seated so still, a glass of water could be placed on his head and no movement would be detected from the water. His calm exterior was in direct contrast to the horrifying pain his body was constantly experiencing. After gaining all these new Omega Daos, his Dao Heart could start supporting the training of the fourth level of the Daoheart Technique.

Chojusen's main body had been in this state since he resumed his journey to the Voidstar Gate, but a surprise prompt from the system took him out of this state. The system said [Oi, It seems that today is your lucky day~]

"Huh? What's up?"

[Well the first piece of good new is that your "button" is fully recharged so you can call another person over to this plane of existence. The other good news is that your true body already finished conquering the third plane. He's already reached the Supreme Divinity level of that world of demon spiritualists; it's kind of like the same as the World God level in this plane. This is also part of the reason for why the recharge time completed much faster than expected.]

The Chojusen in this plane already knew that the main body was truly way too bored and couldn't help but create another avatar to climb up planes. Now that his "button" could be used again, Chojusen waited for the system to give him the "OK" sign before pressing it; he had to make sure that the other side had the person ascending, ready…

Chojusen once again opened a transplanar rift and yet another girl popped out to greet him. This time the lucky winner of Rock, Paper, Scissors, was Rias! She looked more… adult? And her aura was definitely bordering on Daolord levels. Rias wasn't as crazy as Kaguya when she came over to his side, she was more conservative and calm.

Chojusen took a while to get up to speed with what she had experienced since he last saw her and he also told her about what was currently taking place on his side as well. It turns out that Rias had grown to the True God level in her plane before being called over to the third plane after Chojusen's avatar fused back with the true body and then she took part in a grand battle with some Sage Emperor and his six Deity Rank Beasts. In the end, they destroyed the Sage Emperor and trained for a while to reach to highest level of that plane; the Supreme Divinity Rank.

Now, she was before Chojusen with a Destruction Dao infinitely close to the Omega level. A twist though, was that through understanding the essence of Destruction, this little lass had also developed a terrifying Creation Dao.

Chojusen explained to her the levels of this plane and began to guide her with his Teaching, Destruction, and Creation Dao Avatars. Behind her back he also began sneakily giving her insights into the fusion of Destruction and Creation to see if she had talent to create a Dao like Kaguya's Spacetime Dao.

Three days passed, and Chojusen's upgraded party finally reached the outer region of the Voidstar Gate. As he entered this terrifying domain, his entrance alone impacted all those within. There were millions or maybe even billions of cultivators at or above the Ancestral Immortal level in this danger zone and some were bound to be proficient in Numeracy. Those that were skilled in Numeracy could tell from the moment that Chojusen entered the Gate that a cataclysmic upheaval was bound to take place in the not so distant future.

After entering the Voidstar Gate's domain, Chojusen entered what the local cultivators called the River of Time. Along this "river," there were trillions of tears in space and the void. Some of these tears led to highly sought after voidspace bubbles housing many natural treasures, while other tears just let to zones of collapsed space. These zones would not be a threat to Chojusen, but entering one could potentially teleport him off to a far off location at random; far off could be as short as a couple trillion kilometers or as far as all the way out to the edge of the Chaosverse…

Chojusen had the borderline life-cheat known as the Omega Numeracy Dao, so he would only strike gold in this situation; predicting which tear was a zone of collapsed space was easy even if he didn't have his Numeracy Dao as he also had Omega Void and Space Daos. And so began the story of the space trotting Ancestral Immortal, Chojusen.

He would slowly move through the river of time while inching his way closer to the actuall Voidstar Gate, located at the center of this danger zone domain. Every time a voidspace bubble happened to cross Chojusen's path he would enter it and plunder away all the treasures around. Sometimes he would get lucky and find special environmental Domains like the Spacetime Domain Kaguya train within back at the legacy site of Emperor Gengxin, and other times, his luck wouldn't be so good and he would run into a voidspace bubble that had already been looted.

On this journey, Chojusen crossed paths with several bandit cultivators that tried to steal his treasures, kill him, and rape his wives. These people… all suffered various degrees of punishment. Those who merely wanted to steal his stuff and kill him were killed themselves. As for those that dared to cast lascivious glances at Kaguya and Rias? Only the worst tortures imaginable awaited them. It should go without saying that Chojusen as a master of Karma, Alchemy, and Formations, he had endless ways to cause the most amount of despair imaginable…

A month after entering the River of Time. Chojusen woke up in a frozen world, his Hail, Snow, and Ice Daos reached the Omega level. Another three months passed, and Chojusen could be seen floating in a world of lightning and magnetism, his Dao of Magnetism also reached the Omega level.

Half a year after he entered the River of Time, his body could be seen glowing as his Dual Cultivation Dao had also reached the Omega level; needless to say he was "inside" Rias at this time. At last he could fulfill his wives' dreams of bearing children from him; but that would have to wait for the true body to merge with this avatar.

A full year after Chojusen entered the River of Time, his Destruction, Creation, and Teaching Daos Reached the Omega level and Rias managed to fuse Destruction and Creation into Oblivion; she reached Omega Oblivion and also broke through to the Daolord level. Now there were two people that were technically above Chojusen; his crocodile tears fooled no one…

Chojusen's wealth start increasing exponentially as he travelled further into the River of Time; the closer he was to the real Gate, the more naturall treasure would be found in the void space bubbles he entered. It got to the point where even some of the poorer Hegemons would sigh when compared to Chojusen.

One day, as the Final Shuttle "slowly" drifted through the local spacetime continuum, Chojusen had to stop as he felt a horrifying chill go down his spine after passing one of the countless tears along the River of Time. This was an instinctual fear practitioners of the Dao of Numeracy felt when they came across something absolutely threatening to them.

Chojusen stopped and did a couple divinations, his figure seated in the lotus position, a thousand star-like runes revolving around him. When he finished his initial set of divinations he concluded that the source of this fear would no doubt kill him if he charged in alone. If he accounted for Kaguya and Rias being by his side his chances of survival barely rose to a hundredth of a percent, but if Marshadow was accounted for, there would be a 99.99% chance of survival; that 0.01% chance of death came from the possibility of Chojusen doing something stupid like leaving Marshadow's side, or if something/someone vastly beyond his capabilities made an enemy out of him.

Chojusen was confused. Why was something so dangerous out in the middle section of the River of Time? He guessed that this voidspace bubble could only be conquered by Eternal Emperors or above. In any case, where there was danger there was also fortune, and this being as dangerous as it was, Chojusen obviously wouldn't give it up.

Ay, I have three chapters planed out for today; just need to edit the other two before posting them, so BOLO for that~

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