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Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system. As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok. Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~): http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751 https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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The Omniverse Rejoices The Birth Of A New Dao

Minutes before Chojusen started the formation of his own Dao of Reality, Marshadow was lazing around on the white room, as it had been doing for the past year. He was laying on his side while sucking away at the nihility flames stored in his "pokeball," while counting away to pass the time.

"31,449,600… 31,449,601..." As he counted away mindlessly, Marshadow felt a chill go down his spine after noticing a ripple emanated from Chojusen. This chill was a precursor to what would later be known as "Hell's Rising." Marshadow, a Chaos Primordial capable of surviving confrontations against Autarchs, actually felt the need to back away from Chojusen as the ripples coming off from his body started getting stronger.

These ripples started slow and soft, but quickly grew into giant tears through the white room. These were tears through spacetime, the void, and the nullvoid from underneath; reality itself was crumbling away from these ripples. The tears even spread out enough to connect Chojusen to the world outside of the voidspace bubble, outside of the Voidstar Gate, outside the Staffgod Realmverse, and directly through to the source of all Daos; the Ultimate Prime Essences of the Omniverse.

For Chojusen's breakthrough, these tears allowed him to use natural primal chaos to establish his World God foundation. Chojusen first deprived the poor Doomview Castle and its voidspace bubble world of all its primal chaos before moving on up to the Voidstar Gate level. There, his breakthrough summoned a terrifying maelstrom of energy that shook all the adventurers in the Voidstar Gate and started to tear off chunk after chunk of primal chaos from this region as well.

Fortunately for those there, Chojusen's breakthrough was so absurd that the swirling maelstrom of energy started taking primal chaos from the Realmverse and even the Infinite Void separating the various Chaosworlds of the Omniverse before it sucked away all the energy in the Voidstar Gate. Still, the Voidstar Gate and even the Staffgod Realmverse were dealt a heavy blow from Chojusen as they were much closer to him than the Infinite Void.

For close to a whole day, Chojusen's reckless energy-stealing breakthrough rampaged without restrain. As the day was approaching its end, the Ultimate Prime Essences of the Omniverse started celebrating the birth of a new Dao and the sounds of the Natural and Grand Dao could be heard across all places in the omniverse, from the backwaters of mortals to the highest of Autarch organizations; everyone felt the Dao itself rejoice for some reason.

Within Chojusen's soulscape, in the Reality Dao Fragment's world, Chojusen was just about to finish his breakthrough, when he suddenly felt all his avatars each give just a small portion of their essence to create a new avatar; the fortieth avatar, the Omnifiend Dao incarnate.

Chojusen left the world of the Reality Dao Law Fragment and the first thing he saw was the Achron level golem look at him with utter trepidation. Behind the Achron were the remaining 10 Emperor, 1,000 Daolord, and 1,000,000 World God golems. Solejin looked at Chojusen and cursed his horrible luck.

If only Chojusen had finished his breakthrough one minute earlier, he would have been free from this shitty castle and he wouldn't have to fight Chojusen. Alas, orders were orders and he was still under the commands of the owner of the Castle's last words, that if an outsider made it to the platinum level and still managed to fail, they would be subject to death.

Of course, with the terrifying display Chojusen had shown since Solejin met him, there was nothing but despair in his heart as he thought of what would result in having to fight a monster as ridiculous as Chojusen.

Since his emotions started to get in the way of his master's orders, Solejin started acting robotically once again. He said "As per the orders of the Doomview castle's master, Exalt Bowenyena, outsider's failing at the platinum level are subject to death! Men! Assemble the Grand Retribution Formation!"

Chojusen watched as the white room dissolved away to expand the battlefield's size to that of the entire world within this voidspace bubble. The grand army of godly warriors assembled themselves in their formation and the void started quaking from their might.

Chojusen watched all this with no reaction. He was calm as can be, his Dao of Numeracy didn't even twitch in response after calculating the odds of Chojusen surviving this confrontation. Chojusen didn't just become a World God, he also picked and founded his own Dao; the Dao of Reality!

Founding a Dao wasn't as simple as making a breakthrough. It wasn't even comparable to reaching the Omega level in a Dao! This was Ultimate Omega; taking over an Ultimate Prime Essence of the Omniverse. The entire Omniverse was now backing Chojusen up…

But even with this insane power up, Chojusen didn't even have to use it against these mere ants. A single word "Descend!" and a depression-inducing Heartforce World ensnared all of his enemies. This was perfect Heartforce world, fueled by Chojusen's now perfect Omnifiend Dao Heart — a Dao Heart that had been tempered by the passage of countless iterations of reality — and his Omniforce energy, the perfected fusion energy he had named after his Dao of Reality.

As soon as this Heartforce World touched these golems, the fight ended. Chojusen could will for all these golems to disintegrate and that would actually happen, as his Heartforce World made his domain a reality. But, that would be a waste of materials, so Chojusen instead just used his heartforce to grind away at these golems' power source and the locked them up in his personal dimension. Even without his Ultimate Omega Dao of Reality, Chojusen could stop the golems from taking energy out of his personal dimension, so they would be at his mercy until he decided how deal with them in the future.

Out of the corner of his eyes, Chojusen spotted a rapidly approaching Marshadow. The little ghost man had actually been ready to teleport and sneak Chojusen out, if the situation became dire, but clearly there wasn't a need for that. Still incapable of comprehending what just happened, Marshadow said "How are you still only a World God?"

Chojusen gave him a shrug and said "I'm not. I actually don't know what level I'm at right now..."

[Uh… You are kind of in a middle space between the World God and Daolord stages. You've already picked your Dao and well… completed it, but you still haven't shattered your Jindan or formed any godgems. I'd reckon you'd be able to go straight to Emperor level after you ascend to the Daolord stage, since you know… you have control over a Prime Essence.]

"Mhmm? I can do that whenever I want. For now, let's just go check out what's left of the castle. I still can't help but feel that it's too out of place."

As Chojusen and Marshadow returned to the castle to investigate, people all over the Chaosverse were losing their shit, scrambling to reach the Voidstar Gate within the Staffgod Realmverse.

Chojusen's breakthrough wasn't like anything ever seen before. Most of the major powers of the Chaosverse thought they were being invaded again or something. An Ancestral Immortal breaking through to the World God stage was possibly one of the least likely thoughts going through anyone's head at the moment.

Autarch Libo or Autarch Staffgod was the first to arrive at the Voidstar Gate, since he was within his Realmverse at the time of the event. Even though he was the first Autarch there, arriving less than a minute after the breakthrough began, he never managed to find the cause of the phenomenon as there were dangerous tears in reality all around the River of Time; effectively masking where Chojusen was absorbing all the primal chaos needed to breakthrough.

One by one, more Autarchs arrived and started to work in concert to find the source of these threatening tears. But in the end, there were just too many places to check and too many tears blocking the Autarchs' snooping. Who'd have thought that 20 Autarchs working together could not find what they were looking for within their own Chaosverse?

Even an outsider of this Chaosverse, a mysterious man above the Autarch rank was intrigued by Chojusen's breakthrough and also did his best to spy on him. Alas, even though this mysterious man was at a higher level than Autarchs, he was a foreigner to this Chaosverse. The Omniverse itself was on Chojusen's side to say nothing more about a mere Chaosverse, thus the mysterious man could do nothing but sigh after spending the day of that event trying his best to see whatever he could, only to end up with nothing to show for his lost time.

The spirit of writing took over me — like the holy ghost — and I managed to get another chapter done~

Night, night, night, chapter!

Must sleep, sleep, sleep...

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