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Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system. As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok. Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~): http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751 https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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Patch Notes

Ay bois, Its me your friendly neighborhood Author-san. This is an auxiliary chapter where I'll be posting what I fix to the novel during the editing period (*gasp). Anyways, this is bound to fill up quick (hopefully), so lets go~

P.S. If I miss anything, this would be the best place to comment what I've missed, since I probably won't be looking for new comments to the complete story very often~

Chapter 1

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

-Got rid of the Speed Stat as it becomes worthless later on as you know…

-Also got rid of the in-chapter updates to skills, so no more (1/100) outside of Status updates!

-Energy → Chakra (Stat)

-Word count increased from 1,397 to 1,462

Chapter 2

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

- Why Chojusen is able to walk at 2 months old without getting odd looks

-Word count increased from 1,864 to 1,984

Chapter 3

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

- Chojusen has a more "natural" response to Obito...

-Word count increased from 1,706 to 1,801

Chapter 4

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

- Chojusen has a more "natural" response to the situation in general

-Word count increased from 1,562 to 1,608

Chapter 5

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

- Chojusen has a more "natural" response to the situation in general

-Word count increased from 1,644 to 1,665

-These are getting harder to fix...

Chapter 6

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added the missing Space Locking Skill (Which was added into Chapter 7 at the time)

-Word count increased from 1,737 to 1,793

Chapter 7

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

- Space Locking Skill that should've been in the earlier chapter has been removed

-Word count decreased from 1,612 to 1,580 :(

-These are getting harder to fix...

Chapter 8

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added one or two sentences to fix plot/lore

-Word count increased from 1,987 to 1,994

Chapter 9

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Word count increased from 1,607 to 1,613

Chapter 10

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Word count decreased from 1,657 to 1,656 :(

Chapter 11

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore

-There is now a reason for why Karin's mom was able to force Chojusen to bite her finger.

-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."

-Word count increased from 1,656 to 1,853

Chapter 12

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore

-Void Cloak's never before seen defect gets mentioned (Its nothing too crazy...)~

-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."

-Word count increased from 1,681 to 1,837

Chapter 13

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore

-First Passive Skill being Staff Mastery was fixed~

-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."

-Word count increased from 1,680 to 1,787

Chapter 14

-Fixed typos across the board~

-Added several sentences to fix plot/lore

-Some of the phrasing has changed to be more "descriptive."

-Word count increased from 1,600 to 1,626

Two things.

One: The new novel is up, so go check it out and tell me how bad it is (I know its pretty bad...)

Two: This Patch Notes Chapter will also be edited after the story along with the other Auxiliary Chapter~

:)

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