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Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system. As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok. Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~): http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751 https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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Just when she was about to go back to the world of lava, Chojusen appeared through a rift in the void with Naruto, Sasuke, and Hashirama. Chojusen joked "Leaving so soon?" He copied Kaguya's style of teleportation and a new skill was created.

[Host has learned the skill: Dimensional Gate

Dimensional Gate (Rank Immortal | 0/100): A derivative technique of teleportation, where the user creates two portals in space. Current Effect: Create a passage between any two points within the user's teleportation range. The larger the size of the passage, the more energy is needed to sustain it.]

Kaguya ignored Chojusen and used a familiar looking bone shifting technique to launch bone spears from her hands at her enemies. Chojusen was apparently still in the mood to joke around, he said "Wow, you have a Rinne Sharingan, Byakugan, and now you also have the Shikotsumyaku? Do you have other bloodline limits I should be aware of?"

Chojusen's humorous mood changed when he saw Destruction and Time Law Principles get infused into the bone spear projectiles. He shouted "Don't let those spears touch you!" But it was too late, and Naruto got hit directly through his chest by one of the bone spears. Fortunately, it was just a clone and the real Naruto was hiding somewhere in the world of ice.

For a second, Chojusen thought that Naruto's true body was the one that got hit, as the energy signature of all the clones he made after gaining Six Paths Chakra became more perfect than just regular Shadow Clones; to the point where the time law principles within surpassed Chojusen's understanding.

Everyone watched with horror as Naruto's clone started petrifying and disintegrating into dust. They were only relieved when Naruto popped out of some corner and hurled a purple ball of energy at Kaguya. He shouted "Sage Art: Tailed Beast Rasenshuriken!" Kaguya saw the energy mass and retreated; this was not an attack she dared to take head on.

She tried to teleport away, but the result was just Chojusen using a Dimensional Gate to cause Naruto's attack to hit her anyways. Chojusen decided he should learn more concentrated energy attacks in the future as he saw the effects of Naruto's attack.

The attack Naruto launched had power to rival CHojusen's supernova, however, its effective range was very small. It only looked like Kaguya had been hit by a weak explosion, but everyone in the battlefield could see the damage done by the law principles in Naruto's attack; Chojusen even declared that Naruto's attack could stop Madara if he were still alive.

Regrettably, the fight didn't end with Kaguya getting hit by the Tail-Beast Rasenshuriken. She looked a bit roughed up, but overall, her aura hadn't changed too much. It seemed that sealing her was the only way to get finish her off. But with her current prowess, any seal Chojusen could create would be completely useless against her.

Back at the site of Chojusen and Madara's fight, Chojusen's clone was currently sighing. His true body had done all it could to not involve the people here, but they just couldn't help wanting to cut in on his action.

After Chojusen's clone teleported Black Zetsu away to the site of the new battlefield, the clone returned to supervise the various factions and groups. He hadn't forgotten that they tried to invade his village, but as a mere clone it couldn't decide their fate until the true body showed up.

In the time it took Chojusen to allow for Kaguya to revive and start the fight with her, Rin had explained to Obito what really happened all those years ago; how she impaled herself into Kakashi's lightning blade to stop the Three Tails to be used as a weapon against the Hidden Leaf Village.

Obito felt absolutely horrible after knowing the truth, and the fact that everyone he cared about forgave him for his actions only made him feel worse. Now that he wasn't hellbent on wiping out the Hidden Leaf Village, he felt he had to make some sort of reparations, so he gave Kakashi his other eye. He did this because he noticed that Kakashi also had a Mangekyo and with a full set of Sharingans he would be on a completely new level; more so, he did it to show that he had resolved to change his mistake.

Kakashi didn't really understand why Obito wanted him to have his other eye until Obito started spitting out some chilling facts. Obito told Kakashi that with his other Sharingan, he would be able to use the short range version of Kamui to gain intangibility and the ability to cross into his own personal dimension. Kakashi would also not be constantly drained with two Sharingans now supporting his ocular powers, and since they were not his original eyes, he would get the Eternal Mangekyo version of the Sharingan. And then there was a complete Susanoo on top of all these benifits.

As someone who had lived with a Mangekyo Sharingan for decades, Kakashi learned how to use his new powers at a rapid pace.

Everyone was waiting for Chojusen to come back as they had nothing else to do with his clone watching them, so they all paid close attention to the ordeal of Kakashi gaining new Sharingan powers. As Ino and Karin heard that Kakashi could now use Kamui to enter his own personal dimension, they became excited as they might be able to help their lover out. Ino asked "Does your personal dimension allow you to shorten space relative to the outside dimension?"

Kakashi was confused, but Obito responded calmly, he said "Yes, that is how I traveled long distances. But how did you know about that?"

"Chojusen has his own personal dimension, remember? He's told us a few things about the perks that come with having one. Its part of the reason we are actually seventeen and not twelve-years-old."

She turned to Kakashi and said "Anyways, now that you can cross the large distance, lets go him him out!"

Kakashi said "I'd love to, but I don't even know where they are."

Karin said "I can lead you to him if you keep a part of the outside world open while we travel through your dimension."

Ino cut in "What are we waiting for! Do it!"

As Kakashi took the girls into his Kamui dimension, Tobirama, the second Hokage said "Wait! Take this before you leave." He then passed Kakashi a signalling seal and a Flying Thunder God seal.

Kakashi nodded and warped Karin, Ino, and himself into his dimension and the three of them were lead by Karin to Chojusen's location. In the Kamui dimension, Kakashi could be considered god, so he made one step in his dimension equal to ten thousand in the outside world.

Karin could easily find Chojusen. After she had her potential excaved, her abilities as a sensor were horrifying to say the least; even If Chojusen left the planet, she could still know what general direction to take.

As Kakashi's group moved to reach Chojusen, Tobirama was making preparations back where the various factions were being kept. He said "I will now create a Flying Thunder God Reverse Summoning Formation. Who would like to join me in the battle to assist young Chojusen in fighting?"

Almost all of the Hidden Leaf powerhouses volunteered to go to the battle, Rasa and Gaara also chose to tag along. The powerhouses from the Land of Earth, Lightning, and Water also scrambled to try and earn some brownie points with Chojusen in hopes that they would not stop existing when Chojusen dealt them a punishment.

Back in Kaguya's ice dimension, Chojusen, Naruto, Sasuke, and Hashirama were all using various ninjutsu attacks to consume Kaguya's strenght.

Chojusen shot out a burst of seven flame bullets, but he controlled them to stay the size of a finger tip until they landed on Kaguya. Sasuke buffed up Chojusen's flame bullets with the black flames of Amaterasu. Naruto used Wind Release Great Breakthrough to further exaggerate the power of Chojusen and Sasuke's ball of undying flames and Hashirama used Six Paths energy to support his Wood Style binding chains to restrain Kaguya.

Kaguya was held in place, but after saying "Eight Gods Vacuum Physique," her entire body was consumed in a chakra cloak and the wood that restrained her, disintegrated. Then in a show of strenght, she caught the flame bullets that were buffed beyond belief and crushed them in her hands.

Kaguya then moved close to the speed of light and dealt a heavy blow to Chojusen sending him o far up into the sky that those below could only see him as a speck. She teleported over to his body and started beating him savagely, every punch or kick would send him dozens of kilometers away; the distance Chojusen travelled would have been larger if Kaguya didn't keep teleporting to his side and hitting him again to keep her momentum.

For the first time in his life, Chojusen suffered what could be considered lethal damage. Even with his myriad healing abilities, it would take a couple minutes to recover from this… if he stayed in his Elemental Sage Mode that is. Chojusen snorted and entered Fiendgod Butterfly Sage Mode.

The very moment he made the change, his body stopped flying. Chojusen used Density Duplication to the max and managed to counter Kaguya's assault. His punch sent her flying as a result. However, he focused on healing himself rather than dishing out his own assault. He used water healing in conjunction with temporal restoration and the wounds that covered his body healed up to a certain point and then faded to what his body would look like without the wounds.

Chojusen then teleported back to his allies' side and his Fiendgod Eyes worked to keep Kaguya from ambushing them. Naruto, Sasuke, and Hashirama looked at Chojusen in wonder as he now took on a never before seen form; it was not seen clearly back when he used it to deal with Pain's meteor because Chojusen flew dozens of kilometers up the atmosphere and teleported himself with the meteor, before returning in his base form.

With a set of white armor created with Armament Creation, auburn hair, ghostly eyes and sage marking, and black energy cloaking his body, Chojusen looked half like a demon and the other half like a fiend. His body and staff warped the spacetime directly next to him.

Kaguya used her gate style teleportation to appear before him once again. As she was about to say something, she turn to look to her left. Chojusen also looked in the same direction as he noticed a familiar swirling space travel towards him at a blindingly fast speed.

CHOICE: Kaguya either dies, gets sealed, or becomes a love interest… (I don’t know how, but the story has already been exaggerated beyond canonical logic)

Choose WISELY -SageDawn

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