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Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system. As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok. Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~): http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751 https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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Aftermath Of Obito’s Invasion

As Chojusen was losing his mind trying to figure out how he would go back to his family, a prompt from the system caught his attention.

[Congratulations host, you've completed the mission: Save Minato and Kushina from the masked man's assault. Completion percentage is 100%. Bonus Mission: Seal the Nine-Tails in Naruto has also been completed perfectly. Rewards are being calculated…

Rewards finalized: Host has earned the Cloning method, Personal Dimension method, and the system's Store and Map functions.]

As he digested the system's notification, Chojusen felt a stream of knowledge appear in his mind and he instantly learned the cloning and personal dimension skills.

[Host has learned the Skills: Cloning and Personal Dimension

Cloning (Rank D | 0/100): The user uses neutral energy to make a perfect copy of himself. Upon deactivation, all knowledge and experiences gained from clones will be transferred to the main body. As proficiency with this skill rises, the number and power of clones that the user can make increases. Current Effectiveness: Creates one clone with 0.1% the main body's total power.

Personal Dimension (Rank C | 0/100): The user manipulates space energy to become an isolated dimension, accessible only to the user or those with space mastery above the user. As proficiency with this skill increases, so too does volume of space inside the user's dimension. Current Size: 0 cubic meters (Until creation)]

Chojusen was very satisfied with these rewards as they would be immensely beneficial, even now. No longer will he have to play the part of a baby and train endlessly in his crib. Now his clone could just do that, and he could explore the village in Void Concealment. The practicality of having a personal dimension needed no explanation.

Chojusen wanted to know about the system functions he had unlocked, so asked the system "Exactly what do the Map and Store functions do?"

[The Map function allows you to see your position in the world, so long as you visit a place, the system will record the spatial coordinates of that location, allowing you to teleport there even if it is outside your normal range. The Store function is self-defined; its a store where you can buy things. Anything from techniques to rare materials can be purchased with shop points. You can earn shop points by completing missions.]

After Chojusen understood the system, he returned to worrying about what he would do with regards to his family. He decided to first see what they were up to by teleporting next to them to see what they were doing.

Choza had been a part of the ninjas that helped fight against the Nine-Tails, so he was currently acting as a leader and giving tasks to other lower ranked ninjas around him. Next, Chojusen teleported beside to his brother and saw their nanny panicking in the corner of the room.

When the Nine-Tails attack first started, Choza had first gone to his house and told the nanny to take his children to an emergency shelter. Choza knew that the Nine-Tails, like all the other Tailed Beasts, was capable of using cataclysmic energy attacks capable of wiping out mountains, so he prioritized fighting off the Nine-Tails to save not only his sons but also the rest of village.

After giving instructions to the nanny, he ran off to the battlefield, not knowing that when the nanny went back to carry his children to the shelter, she only found Choji; his other son was missing.

Chojusen had a bit of deja vu when the nanny start verbalizing her situation. Its seems that when people thought they were alone, they would just start talking to themselves about their problems.

Since the shelter had given a room to the nanny and Choza's children, The nanny was currently just pacing back and forth, thinking of what she would tell Choza when he came back. She didn't notice that Chojusen had teleported back to his crib and deactivated his Void Concealment.

Chojusen gambled that the nanny would not say anything about his disappearance now that he was back. Even if she did say that he was gone, who would believe her?

After Chojusen returned to his crib, he quickly went to sleep. He was tired of using so much energy and spying on Obito. Eventually, Choza returned, and as expected, the nanny didn't say anything about Chojusen's disappearance.

For the next couple days, the village took some steps to recover from the damage of the Obito's attack. Minato, with the help of all the ninjas that had been present for the battle against the Nine-Tails, explained how the Nine-Tails attacked the village while under control of Obito and how the Nine-Tails voluntarily allowed itself to be sealed for the prosperity of the village.

The ninjas helped spread knowledge that the Nine-Tails was not a demon and instead a sentient chakra beast capable of emotions, and should not be condemned for the times it has attacked the village; both times it was under the control of another person. However, some people were insistent on believing that the Nine-Tails and its Jinchuriki were both monsters that should be killed.

Since that was the case, Minato showed a rare moment of wrath, making the fact that his son was a Jinchuriki an S-class secret and anyone caught spreading information of this "secret" would be subject to capital punishment. Most people, though, understood where the Hokage was coming from. After all, the village was mostly made up of ninjas and they had all seen how the Nine-Tails changed after it was no longer under the control of Obito.

After the Nine-Tails incident was resolved, nothing notable happened to Chojusen for two years. He just spent his time practicing his skills or exploring the village while leaving a clone next to his brother. Even after all this time, Chojusen could not evolve his Energy Manipulation and Body Refinement skills.

His training pace had also slowed down quite a lot after he became two years old, as right around that time, his father started to let him and his brother go on playdates with some of the other clan heirs. Chojusen might have the intelligence and capacity of a grown adult, but all his past live's experiences were wiped clean from his memories and since he was only a toddler at this point, only other toddler would bother to interact with him.

Chojusen loved to play games with his brother and the clan heirs of the Yamanaka and Nara Clans. Apparently, Choza was good friends with the heads of these Clans and every week, at least once a week he would take Chojusen and Choji to go play with the other kids.

Chojusen and Choji were about half a year older than Shikamaru Nara, the Nara Clan heir, and Ino Yamanaka, the Yamanaka Clan heiress. The three of them became best friends as they would would be in contact most often out of all the other clan heirs they were around.

Since Chojusen's training had slowed down a bit when he was two years old, it almost took another year to for him finally evolve his skills; nine months were spent solely on increasing the last 10 levels of proficiency from 90 to 100 for all his skills. Once all his skill had ranked up for a second time, Chojusen called for his status.

[Status~

Name: Chojusen Akimichi

Level: Mid-tier Jonin

Race: Full Human

Age: 3 Years

Power: 587,999

Speed: 658,241

Energy: 2,016,547

Skills:

Body Refining (Rank S | 0/100): The user has managed to reduce the time it takes to complete a cycle to below a second. Now, energy automatically goes through the cycling process at a rate of one cycle every ten seconds. However, if the user actively uses the technique, the rate increases to two cycles a second. As proficiency increase, so too does the rate of cycling for both automatic cycling and active cycling as well as the increases to power and energy.

Energy/Chakra Manipulation (Rank S | 0/100): Energy/Chakra manipulation has been mastered at a near perfect level. Now the user has the ability to precisely control elemental particles. As proficiency increase, the loss of energy from executing energy-based techniques conversely decreases. The number of particles the user can manipulate also increases as proficiency increases.

Subdimensional Teleportation (Rank S | 0/100): The user uses space particles to move by instantaneous displacement. The greater the proficiency, the larger the range. Current Range: 10,000 kilometers or anywhere the user has been.

Void Cloak (Rank SS | 0/100): The user no longer relies on space particles to act as camouflage. Instead, the user can now cause their body to directly become a part of space. Not only does this skill completely erase the presence of the user, as long as the user's mastery of space is high enough, no one can touch the user. Proficiency is determined by the user's space mastery, as long as the user has better mastery over space than his opponent, they will not be able to do anything to the user.

Space Locking (Rank S | 0/100): The user commands space particles surrounding the target to avoid interacting with the target, disabling the chance for movement to even take place. Only those with a greater mastery over space can partially ignore the effects of this skill. Current Effect: Stops a weak S rank Kage or below indefinitely.

Yang Awakening (Rank S | 0/100): In addition to transferring yang energy to a target from either the user's energy or the yang energy in the environment, the user can now also any tap into the hidden potential locked away in the target's body. Current Effect: Heals even the most fatal injuries imaginable as long the target is still alive and unlocks hidden potential of the body of the target.

Elemental Cloning (Rank A | 0/100): The user uses elemental particles to make a perfect copy of himself. All clones now take on the properties of the elemental particles that were used to create them. Upon deactivation, all knowledge and experiences gained from clones will be transferred to the main body. As proficiency with this skill rises, the number and power of clones that the user can make increases. Current Effectiveness: Creates up to 100 clones with 10% the main body's total power along with an elemental property.

Personal True Dimension (Rank SS | 0/100): The user manipulates space energy to become an isolated dimension, accessible only to the user or those with space mastery above the user. The user's dimension becomes a real living world with time and other elements and can now support life. As proficiency with this skill increases, so too does volume of space inside the user's dimension. Current Size: 50 cubic cubic kilometers.]

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