Dyingreality
Ummmmm Allow me to help you people that are freaking out because this is a system book and are considering reading this 1. The plot seems to move as fast as sonic on roids. 2. The updates - I haven't seen another chapter in the last month and I don't think we will receive any more. 3. So far, the characters seem to have little to no personality to them. They are just there to be there 4. The translation is not horrible but it's pretty bad I really don't care if you listen to my review. I'm just bored so I just decided to write a review about this book. Go ahead and see for yourself if you enjoy it
I've only rated this on the writing quality; I can't rate anything else since the story is unreadable. Please please please fix your formatting. Almost every word is capitalised, and there's a lot of weird spacing. Honestly, I wish you luck with your writing, and if you fix this stuff, I'll give the story a try đ
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This story does have very bad gramer. If you get past that the story at least has a plot, one that focuses on MC getting a harem going. The plot moves along fast which can be a good or bad thing. The system helps by constantly odering the MC to do quests to get women to love him. If he fails MC will die.